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Fantasy based on the intersection of two worlds.
22 total reviews
Comment from
Sally Law
10 Freaking Stars, my friend!! I'm just now catching my breath! What a magnificent chapter! It started at a full run and never let up!! Breathtaking action and peril all around our favorite warrior Gods and their steeds. The Stymphalian Birds added horror to the scene and to the fight for Concorde Valley and for Echo Jones. Hades wants her bad and is pulling out all the stops. I can hardly wait for the next chapter!! Superb, my friend, and aptly illustrated and presented.
Wow!
Sending you my best today as always, and love & blessings across the bridge,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
Wow, thank you Sally. I'll take that 10, lol!! I was trying to trim it down a bit so it wouldn't be so long, but, oh well... best laid plans!!
Thanks for the review and all your wonderful comments!! The poor guys still have the river to cross and the mountain to climb.
Much love, my dear, across the bridge!!
Comment from
Begin Again
And hope springs eternal! Just when they face one of their darkest hours, they are given a morsel of hope to fight for their safety. Another wonderful chapter, Rhonda. I loved it!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
Hi Carol,
Thank you so much for the six stars and for your continued support!! As always, I appreciate your time and effort.
Hugs,
Rhonda
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