Windy Nights
Nature dancing on a windy night.31 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your poem. Your picture is a great choice for your poem. I like the words : the trees dance like wildflowers. Good luck in the contest. Very good job.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Your picture is a great choice for your poem. I like the words : the trees dance like wildflowers. Good luck in the contest. Very good job.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your review! Glad you liked the words and the artwork I chose. Have a nice day!
Comment from ESOSTINE
Your poem is rich in imagery, 'the meadow tickles, the trees dance...', made magical impression. I could visualise the dance of nature in the winds of the night. Great job, dear Zara. Keep them coming, please. Warm regards.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Your poem is rich in imagery, 'the meadow tickles, the trees dance...', made magical impression. I could visualise the dance of nature in the winds of the night. Great job, dear Zara. Keep them coming, please. Warm regards.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your review! Glad you liked it. I love writing poetry, so hopefully I'll be out with some more soon! Have a nice day!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words were delightful to read. The
first two lines flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! I like how the author used the wind to
make this poem come alive! The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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The author's words were delightful to read. The
first two lines flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! I like how the author used the wind to
make this poem come alive! The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you liked the theme of wind. Have a nice day!
Comment from Shanbreen
Love the introduction line, Zara: "Nature dancing on a windy night." Zara. Also, "the meadow tickles" does justice to a beautiful painting. All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Love the introduction line, Zara: "Nature dancing on a windy night." Zara. Also, "the meadow tickles" does justice to a beautiful painting. All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your review! I'm really glad you enjoyed the introduction line. Thank you so much and have a nice day!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Windy Nights, has the proper formatting and makes the chills pop as one imagines the trees caught up in such a determined wind, which will definitely take some branches down.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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This 5-7-5, Windy Nights, has the proper formatting and makes the chills pop as one imagines the trees caught up in such a determined wind, which will definitely take some branches down.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your review! Glad you liked it. Have a nice day!
Comment from Nicki.B
I really like this poem. It's fun.I like how you say the meadow tickles! the image is beautiful the art work ann the colors on the page like movement in nature. Well done
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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I really like this poem. It's fun.I like how you say the meadow tickles! the image is beautiful the art work ann the colors on the page like movement in nature. Well done
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your review! Glad you enjoyed the artwork and the poem. Have a nice day!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
That tickling wind brings the scene to life and brings the movement of nature alive with the dancing of wild flowers, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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That tickling wind brings the scene to life and brings the movement of nature alive with the dancing of wild flowers, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your review!
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You are most welcome x
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You are most welcome x
Comment from royowen
A great projectional image of flowers dancing in the wind, such a precious image you've set up, it's like trees clapping their hands and the rocks crying out to God in worship, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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A great projectional image of flowers dancing in the wind, such a precious image you've set up, it's like trees clapping their hands and the rocks crying out to God in worship, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your review! Glad you enjoyed it.
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Welcome
Comment from Earl Corp
I like your words, but I'm not real impressed with the picture you chose to accompany your poem. Good luck in the contest and keep writing. It doesn't get easier but it becomes better with practice.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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I like your words, but I'm not real impressed with the picture you chose to accompany your poem. Good luck in the contest and keep writing. It doesn't get easier but it becomes better with practice.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thanks for your review. I wanted to add some artwork, and this was the best one I could find.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
The meadow tickles
The trees dance like wildflowers
On these windy nights
I very much enjoyed this. This type of home can be hard to write. Great graphic to go with too
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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The meadow tickles
The trees dance like wildflowers
On these windy nights
I very much enjoyed this. This type of home can be hard to write. Great graphic to go with too
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your review! Glad you liked the graphic.