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When my son calls

One thing I look forward to.

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Comment from nomi338
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I know that feeling. However in my case, I got it started by saying "I love you son" first. After that he had no choice but to repeat my sentence back to me with an "I love you too." Mission accomplished. We do not however, communicate every day. Still it is nice to hear.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

Comment from Cindy Decker 3
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Willie,
This is such a sweet ode to your son.
Your work fits the requirements of a four-line poem. Your words are brief, but very touching.
Great photo and poem.
Best wishes,
Cindy

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

Comment from zanya
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Such a beautiful sentiment expressed here, the love, deep and profound between father and son and the concrete examples of this love - thanks for sharing this positive family moment.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

Comment from Begin Again
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Oh, can I relate to this one! My son (my youngest) calls me every night when he gets off of work. Sometimes we talk for a long time and others just a few minutes, but it means to world to me. funny how things and perspectives change as we age and know that the ticking clock says time is short.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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My sons do that as well. It's so lovely, isn't it. It means we did something right, and our sons have arrived as strong, confident, loving men. Your four-line poem made me smile. Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Four line poem writing prompt. It sounds like you have every reason to be proud. It isn't every young man who would be so considerate. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is such a touching little poem Willie and how proud you must be of your son as he is so very caring. Your poem brought a tear to my eye. I loved the picture of the two of you with your matching moustaches! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

Comment from Lindsey Pabst
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This is so simple but universally meaningful. It is beautiful in its simplicity. There is nothing more important in this world than the love we share with family! I am so glad you and your son enjoy such a special bond.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024

Comment from Sallyo
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It's a grand thing when the adult offspring love you. It seems you did something right! Your poem says it all, really. Your abcb rhyme is a nice simple one that lets the message shine through.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024

Comment from Bill Schott
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This four-line poem, When My Son Calls, has the proper formatting and captures that moment when the bond between the father and son is confirmed a in a phrase. Nice.

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 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024