This Poem Is About A Woman
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Comment from royowen
A really.good poem about essentially a traditional role reversal, but in this day and age I wonder if the trend isn't irreversible one. But excellent humour, and considering the years she stuck around, she must be a lovely girl, but then...you've done a great job with this, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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A really.good poem about essentially a traditional role reversal, but in this day and age I wonder if the trend isn't irreversible one. But excellent humour, and considering the years she stuck around, she must be a lovely girl, but then...you've done a great job with this, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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No, I think she still believes I have a fortune hidden away. Sincerely, Mr. Owens, thank you for another very kind review. Your words are very much appreciated.
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Remember me in your will heh heh.
Comment from Sallyo
So- your narrator is perhaps a submissive? He sounds scared, but as if he enjoys the sensation. The diction you used reminds me of the pieces in the old reciters used in my parents' generation. It's funny:-)
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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So- your narrator is perhaps a submissive? He sounds scared, but as if he enjoys the sensation. The diction you used reminds me of the pieces in the old reciters used in my parents' generation. It's funny:-)
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Sally, surely by now you understand all we men are wimps. We love, honor and obey. We fear the taxman and the wife, but not in that order. Thank you for taking the time to review.
