Midnight Ride
Justice is non-negotiable.24 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
Was just 100 words you have really shown as a writer that you shine this is a marvelous story and it has a real good ending. I enjoyed it very much. I wish you the very best in the contest and I also wish you a wonderful day. Patricia.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Was just 100 words you have really shown as a writer that you shine this is a marvelous story and it has a real good ending. I enjoyed it very much. I wish you the very best in the contest and I also wish you a wonderful day. Patricia.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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It's very kind of you to review this story, Patricia. Thank you for those wonderful stars! Take care.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Great story. And very well written.
It was (seemed like anyway) a good plan on the part of the crook. Get the money, and the victim is on a train steaming away.
But oops!
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Great story. And very well written.
It was (seemed like anyway) a good plan on the part of the crook. Get the money, and the victim is on a train steaming away.
But oops!
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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I appreciate the review, Wayne. Things indeed didn't end well for the kidnapper...
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Her pale, trembling hands clenched the suitcase as she slipped through the damp, deserted alleyways. At the bustling train station, thousands of passengers waited, oblivious.
Nice imagery and great at holding attention
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Her pale, trembling hands clenched the suitcase as she slipped through the damp, deserted alleyways. At the bustling train station, thousands of passengers waited, oblivious.
Nice imagery and great at holding attention
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Nicole. I appreciate your encouraging words.
Comment from kahpot
Payback, I love it, this was very well written, the buildup then the image of a clever criminal, "Leave the suitcase and board." and then "BANG" the end, very clever, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Payback, I love it, this was very well written, the buildup then the image of a clever criminal, "Leave the suitcase and board." and then "BANG" the end, very clever, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Many thanks, kahpot. Take care!