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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Well-written with no errors. This is a good dramatic scene as Echo loses her war against Hades. He makes her immortal and adds the info that she had to come whenever he calls. That should make the coming war more difficult than Echo expects.
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reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Well-written with no errors. This is a good dramatic scene as Echo loses her war against Hades. He makes her immortal and adds the info that she had to come whenever he calls. That should make the coming war more difficult than Echo expects.
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Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you, Carol, for your review. I'm not sure things will turn out as well as Hades anticipates. He's not used to resistance, and Echo seems more sick than anything. Thank you for trusting it will turn out okay for all.
Take care,
Rhonda
