Ah, Early Summer
same as the title25 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Ah, but is the silence immutable? Maybe in that moment. A poem of peace and tranquility crafted in your usual succinct free form. Sounds good to me. Thanks for sharing Debbie
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Ah, but is the silence immutable? Maybe in that moment. A poem of peace and tranquility crafted in your usual succinct free form. Sounds good to me. Thanks for sharing Debbie
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you, Debbie.
Comment from royowen
This looks very much like a very good upbeat post Doug, nicely worded, very optimistic and happy, your daughter's trampoline is a plus, (how old is she?) nicely written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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This looks very much like a very good upbeat post Doug, nicely worded, very optimistic and happy, your daughter's trampoline is a plus, (how old is she?) nicely written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you, Roy.
She is 26 now, living in San Fran. Got a very good job with a computer engineering start up. She worked on the Land Rover that?s on Mars. Perseverance. I?m quite proud of her.
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I can understand, well done
Comment from bonespur
Your words took me to my happy place, I have, where I go to just empty my mind of all the worries and just relax. It's so peaceful. Great job with the poem. Thank you for your review. Good luck and have a blessed day
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reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Your words took me to my happy place, I have, where I go to just empty my mind of all the worries and just relax. It's so peaceful. Great job with the poem. Thank you for your review. Good luck and have a blessed day
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Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thanks much. Appreciate it.
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Comment from EeanBlack
No chance. My world is too hectic. This poem is a dream for me. No, this poem is just a fantasy. Dreams can be realized. Just me and Mother Earth in love. That should be in the poem itself. You actually brought tears to my eyes in your comments section. You are a master. LOL. Wait, why am I laughing? Oh yeah, yo made me happy. Thanks.
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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No chance. My world is too hectic. This poem is a dream for me. No, this poem is just a fantasy. Dreams can be realized. Just me and Mother Earth in love. That should be in the poem itself. You actually brought tears to my eyes in your comments section. You are a master. LOL. Wait, why am I laughing? Oh yeah, yo made me happy. Thanks.
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you most sincerely. You know, ur fast becoming my favorite reviewer. Lol
I?m so glad it worked for you. Doug
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They're hard to find here. I don't pay enough.
Comment from Wendy G
Very gentle and sweet poem - and the notes are also enjoyable. How nice it is to have that sense of peace, calmness and serenity from nature. Well written. An enjoyable read, and a lovely and well chosen image for the presentation.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Very gentle and sweet poem - and the notes are also enjoyable. How nice it is to have that sense of peace, calmness and serenity from nature. Well written. An enjoyable read, and a lovely and well chosen image for the presentation.
Wendy
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Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you, dear. I?m quite pleased, naturally,
that you liked it.