Return To Concorde Valley
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Adam's Choice"Fantasy based on the intersection of two worlds.
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This continuation of your story is rich with tension and emotion. I found myself drawn deeper into the story. The contrast between Adam's stealthy infiltration of Hades' domain and Phillip's desperate flight with Hannah creates a sense of urgency. I like how each character faces their own challenges. Throughout the story their determination to protect those they care about shines through. The interaction between Adam and Echo was enjoyable.
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reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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This continuation of your story is rich with tension and emotion. I found myself drawn deeper into the story. The contrast between Adam's stealthy infiltration of Hades' domain and Phillip's desperate flight with Hannah creates a sense of urgency. I like how each character faces their own challenges. Throughout the story their determination to protect those they care about shines through. The interaction between Adam and Echo was enjoyable.
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Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Michael, thank you so much for this lovely and comprehensive review. Thank you for letting me know the conversation worked. Take care my friend,
Rhonda
