In the Eye of the Storm
When you pass through the waters, I will be with you.24 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Great poem of faith! I like your use of metaphors. The gospels also told how Jesus calms the storm and He will take care of us in the storms of life. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Great poem of faith! I like your use of metaphors. The gospels also told how Jesus calms the storm and He will take care of us in the storms of life. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Helen. You're so right. Sometimes, like His disciples, we forget His promise and His power...we, of little faith. Thank you for your review and best wishes. John
Comment from jim vecchio
This was a very beautiful, God-honoring work, worthy of more than five stars. Thank you for sharing your faith in such poetic form and I hope you do very well in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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This was a very beautiful, God-honoring work, worthy of more than five stars. Thank you for sharing your faith in such poetic form and I hope you do very well in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Jim. As always, I appreciate your kind review and good luck wish. John
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Best wishes and many blessings!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely faith poem that you have written and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful evening and may your weekend be wonderful. Patricia
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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This is a lovely faith poem that you have written and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful evening and may your weekend be wonderful. Patricia
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Patricia. I appreciate your kind review and best wishes. Best wishes to you, as well. John
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written ode to the glory and terror of the sea. The story of Jesus asleep in the boat while the storm raged around it, the terrified disciples woke Him up, He rebuked the storm, and said to His men, Where is your faith? This is a first class poem John great work, great rhyme, articulate language, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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A beautifully written ode to the glory and terror of the sea. The story of Jesus asleep in the boat while the storm raged around it, the terrified disciples woke Him up, He rebuked the storm, and said to His men, Where is your faith? This is a first class poem John great work, great rhyme, articulate language, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Roy. I think sometimes, we of little faith, like His disciples, forget the power and majesty of our Lord and Savior. Thank you for your review, and blessings to you as well. John
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Well done
