A Sunday Kind Of Love
love soothes30 total reviews
Comment from royowen
You and me both, if He hadn't have died for me, I wouldn't have a future, and I would still have an answerable past, although my preference is happy endings, I still recognise a great story, beautifully written Jim, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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You and me both, if He hadn't have died for me, I wouldn't have a future, and I would still have an answerable past, although my preference is happy endings, I still recognise a great story, beautifully written Jim, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind words! If I'm not writing directly about God, or posting something silly for sa contest, I like to write about the human condition and sometimes things in life don't end up with neatly wrapped packages. But I would rather be positive than too negative.
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Me too
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Thanks for reading and your wonderful writing!
Comment from patcelaw
This was a very intriguing story to listen to and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Sometimes we have to write things that don't seem quite appropriate for the particular day but we have to write while it's fresh in our minds. Patricia .
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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This was a very intriguing story to listen to and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Sometimes we have to write things that don't seem quite appropriate for the particular day but we have to write while it's fresh in our minds. Patricia .
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind words! I very much appreciate them!
Comment from LJbutterfly
Though grim, as you stated, this story is well written and engaging. Your protagonist is well developed which entices the reader to his way of thinking. He draws the reader into his way of thinking as he recognizes and regrets his mistakes and understands the reasons for his consequences. This is an exceptional story.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Though grim, as you stated, this story is well written and engaging. Your protagonist is well developed which entices the reader to his way of thinking. He draws the reader into his way of thinking as he recognizes and regrets his mistakes and understands the reasons for his consequences. This is an exceptional story.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind words! I thought they were exceptional!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
So, the twist was that Molly was an undercover cop and she still didn't turn you in after you held a gun to her and forced her into a motel room to get the sleep you needed to keep on the run from the law. Maybe she did love you after all. I was seated on the edge of my chair reading this wondering how it would end and the surprise ending was a thrill in itself.
Jesse
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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So, the twist was that Molly was an undercover cop and she still didn't turn you in after you held a gun to her and forced her into a motel room to get the sleep you needed to keep on the run from the law. Maybe she did love you after all. I was seated on the edge of my chair reading this wondering how it would end and the surprise ending was a thrill in itself.
Jesse
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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I wonder where I can find a girl like her!
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Yes, she is one in a million!
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I must be fortunate. My wife also was one in as million!
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I must be fortunate. My wife also was one in a million!
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Yes, you are!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
The Easter Sunday part didn't bother ME, Jim; I'm Jewish!
What a terrific tale this is! I was enraptured from the get-go! It was totally exciting right out of the gate! I'm a sucker for love stories of this kind, so I absolutely loved every word. FANTASTIC work!! xoxox
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The Easter Sunday part didn't bother ME, Jim; I'm Jewish!
What a terrific tale this is! I was enraptured from the get-go! It was totally exciting right out of the gate! I'm a sucker for love stories of this kind, so I absolutely loved every word. FANTASTIC work!! xoxox
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
Comment from Daylily
I could not stop reading...such an engaging tragic story. At least, both people found each other even if it was just for a very brief time. I think you could have won a contest with this posting. It really is an excellent piece of writing.
One small typo - a space needed after You've:
"Well, Mister Thorson, my story also sounds phony, but it's true. All you need to know is, I didn't take any money. You'vegot to believe that."
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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I could not stop reading...such an engaging tragic story. At least, both people found each other even if it was just for a very brief time. I think you could have won a contest with this posting. It really is an excellent piece of writing.
One small typo - a space needed after You've:
"Well, Mister Thorson, my story also sounds phony, but it's true. All you need to know is, I didn't take any money. You'vegot to believe that."
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thanks you so much! As usual, no matter how much I edit it, I always overlook something!
Comment from hullabaloo22
Fantastic writing! Two innocent people caught up and on the run. You did a great job of character building with both Molly and Alan. The pace was fast, maintained throughout, and the story kept my interest.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Fantastic writing! Two innocent people caught up and on the run. You did a great job of character building with both Molly and Alan. The pace was fast, maintained throughout, and the story kept my interest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Many Thanks and have a Blessed Easter!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Ah, Jim, so you're the one who promised a grim story for us today. However, it is very well written and engaging! You held me spell-bound the entire time. A Sunday type of love was an amazing line!
I owe my life the the same Man, my friend.
Hugs,
Rhonda
Typo:
You'vegot to believe
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Ah, Jim, so you're the one who promised a grim story for us today. However, it is very well written and engaging! You held me spell-bound the entire time. A Sunday type of love was an amazing line!
I owe my life the the same Man, my friend.
Hugs,
Rhonda
Typo:
You'vegot to believe
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Many Thanks and have a Blessed Easter! I fixed the typo! Thanks again!
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You're more than welcome. Please feel free to point them out in mine as well.
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I will, but you're so perfect, it's hard to spot one!
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Oh please!
Comment from BethShelby
You are a fantastic ficition writer. The actiion and dialogue are always good and your work is clean with no errors. It is easy to follow but I'm always a little disappointed in the ending. It isn't satisfying to see and innocent man charged with something he didn't do. Maybe you just consider yourself a realilst because this can happen in real life.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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You are a fantastic ficition writer. The actiion and dialogue are always good and your work is clean with no errors. It is easy to follow but I'm always a little disappointed in the ending. It isn't satisfying to see and innocent man charged with something he didn't do. Maybe you just consider yourself a realilst because this can happen in real life.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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I don't always have such endings, but I do often. I try to write about situations that could happen in life, and the endings aren't often so pretty, though I enjoyed 31 years of happiness with my wife. Happy Easter!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very fine story.
It reads like it was set in the 40s or 50s, but the Nova was 60s or 70s(?).
I'm afraid that even if he could prove his innocence of killing Allison, he would be responsible for Molly's death.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Very fine story.
It reads like it was set in the 40s or 50s, but the Nova was 60s or 70s(?).
I'm afraid that even if he could prove his innocence of killing Allison, he would be responsible for Molly's death.
Best wishes.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much and you and your loved ones have a very Blessed Easter!