Tunnel Busting
an experiment in phonetic flow21 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well, I think this is brilliant and I'm so sorry I have nothing more to give. The message strikes powerfully at the heart. That you have the imagination to draw a political statement from this striking image is a credit to you and it will be remembered. I have deep respect for earthworms and love of birds but this act is excessive and to be condemned. Great summation, even complete with impressive alliteration. Well done, Simian, and good luck! Debbie.
PS My computer is messing around so hopefully this will arrive in an appropriate manner.
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Well, I think this is brilliant and I'm so sorry I have nothing more to give. The message strikes powerfully at the heart. That you have the imagination to draw a political statement from this striking image is a credit to you and it will be remembered. I have deep respect for earthworms and love of birds but this act is excessive and to be condemned. Great summation, even complete with impressive alliteration. Well done, Simian, and good luck! Debbie.
PS My computer is messing around so hopefully this will arrive in an appropriate manner.
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thank you Debbie. There is a ton of white space at the bottom of the review but the top part is quite readable! Appreciate your thoughtful and kind comments. 🦍
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Something very weird is going on with my computer at the moment! I keep losing stuff or the page just moves ahead really fast. As long as you can read it, that's something.
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If you are on a computer, there is likely a key stuck on your keyboard. Either the tab, space, or most likely the enter key. Figure out which one and give it a gentle whack to see if it unsticks. If not, might be time for a new keyboard.
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Thanks! I'll probably just pick it up and smash it! It's been one of those weeks!