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Guided by Faith

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Can faith guide our path?

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Comment from Teri7
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Barbara, This is a great ending to a really great story you have penned. I am so happy to have six stars for this. You used great descriptive word and great dialogue. Thank you for sharing this with us! love and blessings, Teri.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Exceptional
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Perfect title, perfect tulip and ring photo. Tulips are my favorite flowers. For our 10th Anniversary we had just moved into the house we bought two years ago and Chris didn't get a chance to find tulips. He got me a bouquet of roses. But, when he finally looked around our backyard he saw, the last homeowners had tulips planted around by the fenced yard al around and in the Spring, they all came up so beautifully. This was a very romantic and interesting book, with such authentic dialogues and full, colorful descriptions. The story moved at a perfect pace, and also all tied together well .Good for you finishing your book! I truly enjoyed it. I felt like I knew the characters, because it was so well written and the times of suspense were good too. Plus the dog. I am such a fan of this story! Congratulation Barbara, my Friend!! :) Alexandra (or Alexan, my family nickname) xoxo


usual times,
(Do you mean clothes?)

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Alexandra Trovato on 18-Mar-2024
    You're welcome. :)
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Oh, Barbara, I liked the ending of this. It was romantic and oh so satisfying. And congrats on the newest publication of your other novel. You certainly are the master of romances on this site. Great wrap up. Gretchen

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Exceptional
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Aw, Barbara, this was short and sweet. So he got his Emma in the end. It's been a great story which I enjoyed reading. Also, congratulations on your new book release. Ulla xcx

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from patcelaw
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In reading this book, I have enjoyed the chapters that I have read. I have not read all of them. I do not think but you do a very good job with your writing, and I wish you the very best with all of your writing and especially with your book thank you for posting such nice stories. Patricia.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you for the kind review. My romance novels are basically Christian romance novels. LOL
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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Congratulations on completing this novel. It seems strange that all the activity took place over such a short time - I thought it was more. Good luck with publishing it. kay

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

First sentence: Should Winters be Winters' to show ownership of bakery?

I've never heard of the Oscar Wilde quote; I like it:-)

"As the kisses linger" - change to "lingered"

"Her eyes light up the room" - "lit" up the room.

Well, I'm so glad that this ended on a romantic note, even though I would have liked to have seen his rope, notes, and tulips in place a little longer. It's almost like Emma wanted to move on.

Good luck with the new book on Amazon, and with the one you are currently posting.

I've enjoyed reading this; the six is for your whole effort - I know it was a lot of work.

Take care,

xo
Pam


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    There are wild animals and such around the pond. That's where the critter came from that attacked Molly. I think she's attempting to keep it safe. Thank you for the help and support. I've made the corrections.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Aww this is a perfect ending for these lovebirds and I wish them well in the future (maybe another book?) Congrats on another book published too! You're prolific! Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you for the kind review. I've been playing around with Emma's mom getting remarried.
reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 17-Mar-2024
    I think it would be a great spin-off!
Comment from Paul McFarland
Exceptional
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We'll end this novel with six stars, Barb. Great job, and you ended things perfectly. I really enjoyed this piece of work and am looking forward to more.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from BethShelby
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I have really enjoyed your story. I like the Emma was seemed for fragile and immature and is lest predictable. She was an interesting character. It was an excellent love story. Congratulations on getting another book on the market.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you for this kind review.