The beauty of Spring.
Beauty is all around us.47 total reviews
Comment from Glenda Collins
I love that this is a poem about spring. Beautiful presentation and lovely words. I echo your sentiments and the tease of it is captivating. Just watching and waiting to see what beauty spring will bring next. Great entry for the contest. Thanks for sharing.
Glenda
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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I love that this is a poem about spring. Beautiful presentation and lovely words. I echo your sentiments and the tease of it is captivating. Just watching and waiting to see what beauty spring will bring next. Great entry for the contest. Thanks for sharing.
Glenda
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your comments.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Personification is my favorite thing. This is an excellent poem with good imagery words and colorful descriptions. It is thought provoking, and relatable too. The artwork compliments your words well. hanks for sharing it.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Personification is my favorite thing. This is an excellent poem with good imagery words and colorful descriptions. It is thought provoking, and relatable too. The artwork compliments your words well. hanks for sharing it.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
You will no doubt hate me, but your poem does not make sense to me.
Nature teases me ( this is fine)
Modeling Her loveliness ( you then do what?)
Captive in her arms( action was required and you simply made a statement)
It should be more like this:
Nature teases me
I bask in the loveliness
Held captive by joy
If you edit your poem, tell me so I can change your rating to a five. I can tell you have the talent in you. When I first got here I was edited to death. Our work is our babies, and once you get past hating me, you see the difference. I wish you luck. Karen :-)
Held captive by joy
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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You will no doubt hate me, but your poem does not make sense to me.
Nature teases me ( this is fine)
Modeling Her loveliness ( you then do what?)
Captive in her arms( action was required and you simply made a statement)
It should be more like this:
Nature teases me
I bask in the loveliness
Held captive by joy
If you edit your poem, tell me so I can change your rating to a five. I can tell you have the talent in you. When I first got here I was edited to death. Our work is our babies, and once you get past hating me, you see the difference. I wish you luck. Karen :-)
Held captive by joy
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank You for your review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like your personification here of nature showing off her beauty as spring arrives. Your 5-7-5 verse captures a sense of her being in control and titillating your emotions. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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I like your personification here of nature showing off her beauty as spring arrives. Your 5-7-5 verse captures a sense of her being in control and titillating your emotions. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
A lovely expression of your love of nature. We can never hope to be as beautiful and thrilling as She is, not even when captive in her arms.
A beautiful and fitting image for this poem; I wish you good luck in the contest.
Pam
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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A lovely expression of your love of nature. We can never hope to be as beautiful and thrilling as She is, not even when captive in her arms.
A beautiful and fitting image for this poem; I wish you good luck in the contest.
Pam
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A lovely entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry contest. The poem brings mother nature to life in all her beauty. The artwork you chose to accompany it captures the elegance of springtime and adds to the effect of the poem. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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A lovely entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry contest. The poem brings mother nature to life in all her beauty. The artwork you chose to accompany it captures the elegance of springtime and adds to the effect of the poem. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Gunner Lil
You have used a great picture.
This reader enjoyed this poem very much. An easy read that has excellent pace and flow.
Even with the short word count you have shown the beauty of spring time.
Thank you!
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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You have used a great picture.
This reader enjoyed this poem very much. An easy read that has excellent pace and flow.
Even with the short word count you have shown the beauty of spring time.
Thank you!
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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You are very welcome. Thank you for your Six Star Review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
When you say beauty teases me you do not mention nature yet in your author's notes you write take time to enjoy nature's beauty. The picture you chose is beautiful beyond compare it infuses me with your caring nature and helps me to see that you are a kind, caring person.
Enjoy the weekend.
Jesse
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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When you say beauty teases me you do not mention nature yet in your author's notes you write take time to enjoy nature's beauty. The picture you chose is beautiful beyond compare it infuses me with your caring nature and helps me to see that you are a kind, caring person.
Enjoy the weekend.
Jesse
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review. Same to you.
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You're welcome and thanks.
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I see what you mean. I went back and changed beauty to Nature. Thank you.
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Thanks again for your review. Once I changed Beauty to Nature I received a Six Star Rating from the next reviewer. Thanks again.
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Yay. I'm so glad you took my suggestion to heart.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery, alliteration, and personification.
-I like the second line with "modeling her loveliness."
-A very good closing line.
-Good luck in the contest; a good entry.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery, alliteration, and personification.
-I like the second line with "modeling her loveliness."
-A very good closing line.
-Good luck in the contest; a good entry.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review. Much appreciated.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
I do not believe I've ever read any of your work before. This 5-7-5 is crafted well, and your presentation is lovely. Good luck in the contest, and thank you for sharing,
~patty~
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Hi there,
I do not believe I've ever read any of your work before. This 5-7-5 is crafted well, and your presentation is lovely. Good luck in the contest, and thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review. Glad you liked it.
