Waking up your hidden treasures.
A call to use what God has given you.25 total reviews
Comment from Laurie Holding
I so agree with this lovely haiku, and especially like your manipulation of the first line, the ability to rise as "Rise ability." Clever. Thanks for posting and good luck to you in the contest!
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I so agree with this lovely haiku, and especially like your manipulation of the first line, the ability to rise as "Rise ability." Clever. Thanks for posting and good luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A strong motivational 5-7-5 verse which sends a message to all of us to engage with the world and use our God-given gifts for the betterment of others. Nicely done! Perhaps to enhance flow - a dash after 'ability' with lower case 'g' to follow and remove punctuation after 'now.'? Your text is well centred but the font could be slightly larger to make this lovely verse really stand out under the image. Just some suggestions. Thanks and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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A strong motivational 5-7-5 verse which sends a message to all of us to engage with the world and use our God-given gifts for the betterment of others. Nicely done! Perhaps to enhance flow - a dash after 'ability' with lower case 'g' to follow and remove punctuation after 'now.'? Your text is well centred but the font could be slightly larger to make this lovely verse really stand out under the image. Just some suggestions. Thanks and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review. I will consider your suggestions. I wanted larger fonts but having trouble finding them. I will get there. Thank you for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from patcelaw
Whether we know it or not, we all have some impact up on the world in which we live. When we have our talents and use them, it will impact others. I enjoyed your 575 for the contest that I wished you the best contest. Patricia
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Whether we know it or not, we all have some impact up on the world in which we live. When we have our talents and use them, it will impact others. I enjoyed your 575 for the contest that I wished you the best contest. Patricia
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
Comment from Julie Helms
Excellent point. If everybody contributed their abilities there would be a mighty impact on the world! Good topic and correct syllable count for the contest. Best of luck! Julie
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Excellent point. If everybody contributed their abilities there would be a mighty impact on the world! Good topic and correct syllable count for the contest. Best of luck! Julie
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
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Comment from jessizero
Your poem was inspiring, and you got the syllable count correct. I like your author's notes, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Your poem was inspiring, and you got the syllable count correct. I like your author's notes, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
