Willing Hearts
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Comment from judiverse
I hope you won't make Sami and Noah too much like Seth and Emma. But Sami is headstrong and has had to be rescued. Like Seth, Noah is very protective and quick to come to Sami's rescue. He's also bossy. This is an exciting story line, but Sami needs to let the professionals work the case. I know, that would spoil the story. Maybe you could play up more her desire to find the kidnapped girl. Your characters are coming along fine. Just make them different from your other characters. judi
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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I hope you won't make Sami and Noah too much like Seth and Emma. But Sami is headstrong and has had to be rescued. Like Seth, Noah is very protective and quick to come to Sami's rescue. He's also bossy. This is an exciting story line, but Sami needs to let the professionals work the case. I know, that would spoil the story. Maybe you could play up more her desire to find the kidnapped girl. Your characters are coming along fine. Just make them different from your other characters. judi
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Sami is done trying to find Myra.
Comment from lyenochka
I feel like Noah is another Seth but a little more direct and confident. But he shakes his head, too. Lol. I certainly hope that Sami listens to Noah's warning about Big T. Great interactions here!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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I feel like Noah is another Seth but a little more direct and confident. But he shakes his head, too. Lol. I certainly hope that Sami listens to Noah's warning about Big T. Great interactions here!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Sami is impulsive. Noah is more straight forward than Seth. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
out of six for now. However, I am having a hard time getting into this one. The other one has my reading mine for now. It will take a while to adjust. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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out of six for now. However, I am having a hard time getting into this one. The other one has my reading mine for now. It will take a while to adjust. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Not problem. This is a little different but will end up with have the familiar feel to it before long. Still setting it up. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was so good, I loved the interplay of their chat, these two are definitely going to be together and fall in love. I can tell what the future holds as well!! I hope she listens to him and doesn't go out the next day. Another excellent chapter, Barbara. Well done. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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That was so good, I loved the interplay of their chat, these two are definitely going to be together and fall in love. I can tell what the future holds as well!! I hope she listens to him and doesn't go out the next day. Another excellent chapter, Barbara. Well done. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Sami is impulsive and Noah is pretty straight forward. They'll have issues.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Barbara, I am really loving this book! You're showing a different side of your writing and I love it. There is a lot of raw emotion that is natural but not predictable. I'm looking forward to seeing where this book is headed.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Barbara, I am really loving this book! You're showing a different side of your writing and I love it. There is a lot of raw emotion that is natural but not predictable. I'm looking forward to seeing where this book is headed.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Sami is unpredictable.
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I was getting that, and your hero, which predictable in his own way, isn't what she seems to be used to.
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Noah isn't what she's used too. It's almost like oil and water.
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Ahhhhh. A mysterious character at this point, he has depth and compassion, though a bit rigid in his mannerisms. I like both characters.
Comment from Teri7
Barbara, This is a really great chapter with Sami and Noah. I do hope Sami listens to Noah. I would never want to come in contact with Big T. He sounds really mean and dangerous. Great descriptive words and dialogue! love and blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Barbara, This is a really great chapter with Sami and Noah. I do hope Sami listens to Noah. I would never want to come in contact with Big T. He sounds really mean and dangerous. Great descriptive words and dialogue! love and blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
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you are so welcome. I like this story too, but not as much as Emma's. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Begin Again
You have a way of taken over (taking)
just little longer." (a)
Wonderful! Sami and Noah fight the building emotions, but I see them growing closer. It will take time and patience, but I see it happening. I am worried about Big T tomorrow. He's a bad one.
Great work, Barbara.
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!
Hugs, Carol
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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You have a way of taken over (taking)
just little longer." (a)
Wonderful! Sami and Noah fight the building emotions, but I see them growing closer. It will take time and patience, but I see it happening. I am worried about Big T tomorrow. He's a bad one.
Great work, Barbara.
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!
Hugs, Carol
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!! right back at you. Thank you for the kind review and the catches. I have made the corrections.