A Special Love Story
Their love became a hope eternal.27 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
This is the kind of love story I love and hate. I love it because they found each other but I hate it because they didn't get to live the life they both deserved. I can't imagine going through and then finding that person that continues to give you hope even after the very end knowing you can spend forever with them. That's true love.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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This is the kind of love story I love and hate. I love it because they found each other but I hate it because they didn't get to live the life they both deserved. I can't imagine going through and then finding that person that continues to give you hope even after the very end knowing you can spend forever with them. That's true love.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Your review made me smile. Some of your struggle was also a part of theirs in counseling. Thank you for your review and also the six. I know we have only a few and I am humbled that you have given me one of them. -Bill
Comment from patcelaw
I'm sitting here reading your story. It's 3:28 AM. I've been tears having read the story. I am so moved by the faith of both Carolyn and Alan. II'm sure they are and they are together in Heaven and they are happy. Patricia.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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I'm sitting here reading your story. It's 3:28 AM. I've been tears having read the story. I am so moved by the faith of both Carolyn and Alan. II'm sure they are and they are together in Heaven and they are happy. Patricia.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Pat, for a wonderful review. To this day, if I tell there story, I will get all choked up.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a great story of love until death with no departure, overcoming everything thrown in its way. I found it totally convincing and powerful. Way to go! kay
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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This is a great story of love until death with no departure, overcoming everything thrown in its way. I found it totally convincing and powerful. Way to go! kay
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Kay, for a wonderful review.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Within the presence of God all is possible"
Unknown Poet
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As I got deeper into your Valentine's Day contest entry.
Two lovers who would never make love under the covers.
Two lovers with an enduring feet that would follow them to the very end.
Two young lovers doomed with cancer.
Two young lovers who would die within one minute of each other awaiting the embrace on the other side.
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Note:
"You have found Love but once in a lifetime.
This is truly a miracle"
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But when you have found "True Love while you were dying '
miserably.
This is not only a miracle but a blessing"
"A Blessing by God Above"
Unknown Poet.
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Thanks for sharing this and good luck in your Valentine contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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"Within the presence of God all is possible"
Unknown Poet
...
As I got deeper into your Valentine's Day contest entry.
Two lovers who would never make love under the covers.
Two lovers with an enduring feet that would follow them to the very end.
Two young lovers doomed with cancer.
Two young lovers who would die within one minute of each other awaiting the embrace on the other side.
...
Note:
"You have found Love but once in a lifetime.
This is truly a miracle"
...
But when you have found "True Love while you were dying '
miserably.
This is not only a miracle but a blessing"
"A Blessing by God Above"
Unknown Poet.
....
Thanks for sharing this and good luck in your Valentine contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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This is not in a contest. I shared this story as my gift to all Fanstorians on Valentines Day. Thanks for your wonderful and generous review. -Billl
Comment from Wendy G
WHY have I not got a six for you?!!! I write with tears in my eyes at this most moving of love stories. How poignant and sad and yet beautiful that they died within a minute of each other, and saw their Father together, welcomed by Him!! You wrote it beautifully.
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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WHY have I not got a six for you?!!! I write with tears in my eyes at this most moving of love stories. How poignant and sad and yet beautiful that they died within a minute of each other, and saw their Father together, welcomed by Him!! You wrote it beautifully.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Wendy.
Comment from royowen
What a wonderful story Bill, it seems they found something that others have searched for by never really ever find it. But they did, such an intense emotional experience, you have been privileged to witness these things, beautifully written blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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What a wonderful story Bill, it seems they found something that others have searched for by never really ever find it. But they did, such an intense emotional experience, you have been privileged to witness these things, beautifully written blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Roy, for a wonderful review. I'd like to think that I played the role of Cupid. LOL
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I think you did
Comment from karenina
Please pass the tissues! Non-fiction?
As an RN of 35 years I've witnessed such miracles of faith and love.
Whatever our situation, we have a limitless capacity to love and spiritually bind to another.
A meaningful and touching Valentine's Day offering.
Thank you so much for sharing!
Karenina
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Please pass the tissues! Non-fiction?
As an RN of 35 years I've witnessed such miracles of faith and love.
Whatever our situation, we have a limitless capacity to love and spiritually bind to another.
A meaningful and touching Valentine's Day offering.
Thank you so much for sharing!
Karenina
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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You nurses are the ones who witness the end-of-life drama and I appreciate your profession deeply. I hope your VD day is full of hope. Thanks for the review. -Bill
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You are very welcome, Bill. Best wishes to you this Valentine's Day as well!