Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Good morning, Carol!
Is it terrible of me to be happy that Bobby is no longer in the picture?
Whew!
You described the scene of the tragedy very well. But what a way to go!
Your story moves along very well.
Realistic action, emotions, and dialogue.

Thank you for sharing!
diane

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 Comment Written 13-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024

I think many readers are happy that Bobby didn't make it, but now Gabby and Audrey need to be told. Jackson has to interview Austin...and Dion and Judy if she wakes up. And small town rumors will be flying this way and that.

Smiles, Carol

reply by Mrs. KT on 13-Feb-2024

You are having a wonderful time with your story, Carol, and I surely am enjoying it all!

Thank you for sharing!
diane