Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I liked that you told a short, short story in the form of a poem. This definitely fit the qualifications for the contest. I am glad it ended happily - not all love poems do. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

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Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent poem for the contest
with exactly fifteen words, per the prompt.
It's always great when the answer is "Yes!"
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

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Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

Ahh, you've captured that perfect moment in a couple's love. I liked how he saw love in her eyes! Swoon-worthy. Nicely done.
Best of luck with the contest! Julie

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

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Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Excellent writing and rhyming. It is full of good emotion and imagery. The photo image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. Many writers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing it.

Best wishes!

Alex

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

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Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is a classic, and in only 15 words, it just goes to show that creative writing has certainly not lost its abilities and the talent to do it, such as you have displayed, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

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