Dreams and Roots
Worth the wait32 total reviews
Comment from Ginda Simpson
A message of joy and of hope for the spring that awaits us after the cold dreariness of winter. You have captured a lovely image and feeling in your 20 syllable poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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A message of joy and of hope for the spring that awaits us after the cold dreariness of winter. You have captured a lovely image and feeling in your 20 syllable poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Ginda! Xo
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Jessica How true and it is always a treat to await the Spring flowers after a cold winter
A clever 20 syllables nicely presented Best Wishes for the contest
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Hi Jessica How true and it is always a treat to await the Spring flowers after a cold winter
A clever 20 syllables nicely presented Best Wishes for the contest
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much! Xo
Comment from estory
The eternal hope of that wonderful season of spring is in this little tribute. We all know that winter comes to an end, the beautiful flowers are on their way up, the long, warm evenings we love to spend walking in the garden are on the way. Down here, it is on the way a little bit quicker. estory
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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The eternal hope of that wonderful season of spring is in this little tribute. We all know that winter comes to an end, the beautiful flowers are on their way up, the long, warm evenings we love to spend walking in the garden are on the way. Down here, it is on the way a little bit quicker. estory
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much! Beautifully said. Xo
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is a positive uplifting poem that celebrates the change of seasons from winter to spring. I love the picture of the dandelion. I have always been fond of dandelions even though they are considered a weed I see them as a beautiful flower. Let's celebrate the changing of the seasons as soon as they appear.
Jesse
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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This is a positive uplifting poem that celebrates the change of seasons from winter to spring. I love the picture of the dandelion. I have always been fond of dandelions even though they are considered a weed I see them as a beautiful flower. Let's celebrate the changing of the seasons as soon as they appear.
Jesse
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much! I agree! Xo
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Yay!
I'm so glad we are on the same page.
Have a great day!
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, if one regards the snow as a white blanket covering the ground then indeed there is a green carpet of growth and splendour to guide the inner sight, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Oh yes, if one regards the snow as a white blanket covering the ground then indeed there is a green carpet of growth and splendour to guide the inner sight, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy! Xo
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Welcome
Comment from lyenochka
I like your formatting your twenty syllables into 6/4/6/4 instead of just a rhyming couplet as it gives pauses at just the right times. Yes, we are anxious for spring but honestly, not the battle with the dandelions!
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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I like your formatting your twenty syllables into 6/4/6/4 instead of just a rhyming couplet as it gives pauses at just the right times. Yes, we are anxious for spring but honestly, not the battle with the dandelions!
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Helen! Xo
Comment from Sally Law
Oh, this the just beautiful, my talented friend. I think you just ran away with the contest with this one. Sending you my very best today as always, dear Jess, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Oh, this the just beautiful, my talented friend. I think you just ran away with the contest with this one. Sending you my very best today as always, dear Jess, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, my sweet friend! Xo
Jess
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Beautifully expressed in that economic form. I like the idea of the garden lying there in wait and expectation of emerging in the spring. The cycle of nature is always so pleasing. Well done and good luck, Jess! Debbie
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Beautifully expressed in that economic form. I like the idea of the garden lying there in wait and expectation of emerging in the spring. The cycle of nature is always so pleasing. Well done and good luck, Jess! Debbie
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Debbie! Xo
Jess
Comment from papa55mike
I hope we're not having a false spring; it's supposed to be 70 today. I do long for the hummingbirds. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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I hope we're not having a false spring; it's supposed to be 70 today. I do long for the hummingbirds. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much! Xo
Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely worded, 20 syllable form for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a blessed weekend. God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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This is a lovely worded, 20 syllable form for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a blessed weekend. God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Patricia! Xo