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Comment from QC Poet
I'm left wondering if the last line woul be counted differently as the word flows Is individually spaced out possibly adding individual syllables? Love the 5-7-5 passion to this though. Thanks for Sharing your Poetry
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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I'm left wondering if the last line woul be counted differently as the word flows Is individually spaced out possibly adding individual syllables? Love the 5-7-5 passion to this though. Thanks for Sharing your Poetry
Comment Written 25-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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thank you qc :-)
Comment from Jesse James Doty
From the heart and through the pen a writer's blood flows, which is a great way to write about passion in the context of a 5-7-5 poem.
This tells the story of lovelorn passion and the writer's chance to chase the blues away by writing a poem to announce the love felt for another.
Jesse
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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From the heart and through the pen a writer's blood flows, which is a great way to write about passion in the context of a 5-7-5 poem.
This tells the story of lovelorn passion and the writer's chance to chase the blues away by writing a poem to announce the love felt for another.
Jesse
Comment Written 25-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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than k you jesse :-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A passionate post as we put pen to paper an ink our words of love and loss, I wish you luck with the contest, the blood spills onto the page as our hearts break, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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A passionate post as we put pen to paper an ink our words of love and loss, I wish you luck with the contest, the blood spills onto the page as our hearts break, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 25-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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thank you dolly! :-)
Comment from royowen
It's an interesting point that writers will scribe things with, as it were, with their own blood, but of course it's a metaphor not literal, this is an excellent post, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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It's an interesting point that writers will scribe things with, as it were, with their own blood, but of course it's a metaphor not literal, this is an excellent post, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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lol true! thank you roy :-)
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Well done
Comment from Navada
What stunning imagery! This is indeed how it feels sometimes when we pour out the very essence of ourselves into our writing - if we are really brave enough to dig deep and not self-edit. Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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What stunning imagery! This is indeed how it feels sometimes when we pour out the very essence of ourselves into our writing - if we are really brave enough to dig deep and not self-edit. Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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yup! thank you navada :-)
Comment from June Sargent
What flows from the heart onto the paper are not just words, but the heart and soul of the writer. As unique as the DNA in the blood. Fueled by passion, we bleed profusely and a poem is born.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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What flows from the heart onto the paper are not just words, but the heart and soul of the writer. As unique as the DNA in the blood. Fueled by passion, we bleed profusely and a poem is born.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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so true! thank you june :-)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Unspoken Passion, has the proper formatting and leads that feeling through eyes and brain to the lips that finally speak the words aloud.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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This 5-7-5, Unspoken Passion, has the proper formatting and leads that feeling through eyes and brain to the lips that finally speak the words aloud.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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thank you bill :-)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ha, ha, ha that was a good one "love of writing, death by writing:)" unspoken passion
from a heart and through the pen
a writer's blood f l o w s . . .
" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Ha, ha, ha that was a good one "love of writing, death by writing:)" unspoken passion
from a heart and through the pen
a writer's blood f l o w s . . .
" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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lol thank you iza :-)
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Yes good writing is authentic and just bursts out from a good writer. I agree. I enjoyed reviewing this well written poem and presentation. I also enjoyed that Hemingway quote. Best wishes!
Alex
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Yes good writing is authentic and just bursts out from a good writer. I agree. I enjoyed reviewing this well written poem and presentation. I also enjoyed that Hemingway quote. Best wishes!
Alex
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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yup. thank you alex :-)
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent 5/7/5 poem for the 5/7/5 passion writing prompt.
The artwork and presentation are perfect for this piece.
Very nicely written
Blessings
Janet
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Excellent 5/7/5 poem for the 5/7/5 passion writing prompt.
The artwork and presentation are perfect for this piece.
Very nicely written
Blessings
Janet
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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thank you janet :-)