Note to Lady Raven
A little gothic valentine33 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a very well written and authentic poem. As I read the descriptions and imagery, I felt I was reading a tribute to unconditional love. That is the only real form of love, in my opinion. Well done!
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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This is a very well written and authentic poem. As I read the descriptions and imagery, I felt I was reading a tribute to unconditional love. That is the only real form of love, in my opinion. Well done!
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. Thank you!
Comment from jim vecchio
That's how I felt with my college sweetheart. But God led me to aqperfect wife, now sadly gone. As they say, "The heart wants what the heart wants", but thsat is not always to our benefit.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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That's how I felt with my college sweetheart. But God led me to aqperfect wife, now sadly gone. As they say, "The heart wants what the heart wants", but thsat is not always to our benefit.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. Thank you!
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I have to apologize for typos that sometimes creep into my reviews and replies. The last three fingers of my left hand are a bit numb.
Comment from Caroline M England
This is a fabulous poem, I especially love the rhythm and how this strengthens the power of the rhyme. The changes in rhythm and tempo are really effective but the whole poem flows beautifully as well - I felt like I was flowing through the poem which drew me onwards irresistibly . Great use of language - simple like a conversation but evocative at the same time. Lots of contrast in the imagery like slabs butting up together which is gorgeous. Really excellent. Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes
Caroline
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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This is a fabulous poem, I especially love the rhythm and how this strengthens the power of the rhyme. The changes in rhythm and tempo are really effective but the whole poem flows beautifully as well - I felt like I was flowing through the poem which drew me onwards irresistibly . Great use of language - simple like a conversation but evocative at the same time. Lots of contrast in the imagery like slabs butting up together which is gorgeous. Really excellent. Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes
Caroline
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. Thank you!
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My pleasure, it was a beautiful read. 😊 I shall hope to see more of your work Clockwise.
Comment from papa55mike
The plan is to keep going because there is something magnificent just around the corner. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture. I wish I had a six for you.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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The plan is to keep going because there is something magnificent just around the corner. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture. I wish I had a six for you.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. It's encouraging to know that my work resonated with you. Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an honest, raw and clever poem about a rather toxic relationship that we are sometimes drawn to as they are exciting and make us feel alive, but in the end they never last. A skilful poem and I was entertained by this talented post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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This is an honest, raw and clever poem about a rather toxic relationship that we are sometimes drawn to as they are exciting and make us feel alive, but in the end they never last. A skilful poem and I was entertained by this talented post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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A 6!! Thank you, Dolly! Your appreciation for the poem's honesty and cleverness means a lot. Relationships can be complex, and I'm glad the poem resonated with you.
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You are most welcome x
Comment from Allieas
Such a beautiful poem dripping with emotion. I felt your heartbreak through your words, and can also see how the person you describe could struggle to put down roots. I hope this is fiction, and if not, sending you thoughts of healing and moving forward
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Such a beautiful poem dripping with emotion. I felt your heartbreak through your words, and can also see how the person you describe could struggle to put down roots. I hope this is fiction, and if not, sending you thoughts of healing and moving forward
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. It's encouraging to know that my work resonated with you. Thank you!
Comment from QC Poet
The title of your post really caught my eye as a nickname of mine was little crow. Nice Flowing through out the poem and Sorry things didn't work out if this is about someone you know. Thank you for Sharing your Thoughts and Poetry style.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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The title of your post really caught my eye as a nickname of mine was little crow. Nice Flowing through out the poem and Sorry things didn't work out if this is about someone you know. Thank you for Sharing your Thoughts and Poetry style.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. It's encouraging to know that my work resonated with you. Thank you!
Comment from nomi338
Wow! Congratulations on creating a character that is both frightening and totally desirable at the same time. Your poetic voice is very intriguing. It is rap like in its rhythm; the pacing is almost hypnotic. I loved it. I loved this poem.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Wow! Congratulations on creating a character that is both frightening and totally desirable at the same time. Your poetic voice is very intriguing. It is rap like in its rhythm; the pacing is almost hypnotic. I loved it. I loved this poem.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. It's encouraging to know that my work resonated with you. Thank you!
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Please be assure, I meant everything I wrote.
Comment from Siobhan Bracken
I love any poem that conveys the complexities of loving someone for all that they are, as this one does. A beautiful piece of work that really captures the rumination that comes after loss - all the good things feeling just as nostalgic as the bad when you are missing them. Amazing poem.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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I love any poem that conveys the complexities of loving someone for all that they are, as this one does. A beautiful piece of work that really captures the rumination that comes after loss - all the good things feeling just as nostalgic as the bad when you are missing them. Amazing poem.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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I am beyond thrilled and deeply grateful for the extraordinary 6-star review you generously bestowed upon my poem. Your appreciation has filled me with immense joy and motivation. Thank you for this extraordinary honor.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I enjoyed your poetry. I have not seen you before.
This was clever and joyful, acerbic, and even lonely.
You got an awful lot into your poem. Have a grand week. Good work here. Karen
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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I enjoyed your poetry. I have not seen you before.
This was clever and joyful, acerbic, and even lonely.
You got an awful lot into your poem. Have a grand week. Good work here. Karen
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. It's encouraging to know that my work resonated with you. Thank you!
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You are welcome. Karen
