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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I enjoyed your poetry, I enjoyed your style. Kinda Beatnik. Off the beam,freestyle. If you are fresh here, there are poetry classes and clubs for all kinds of writing. Go to the fanstory browser bar go to social and find a club! good luck. Karen
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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I enjoyed your poetry, I enjoyed your style. Kinda Beatnik. Off the beam,freestyle. If you are fresh here, there are poetry classes and clubs for all kinds of writing. Go to the fanstory browser bar go to social and find a club! good luck. Karen
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Karen.
I appreciate your kindness,
although I have been here?
a bit. 2009.
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Wow! Haven't seen you before.
You must not have edited me ever. Have a good week. Karen
Comment from Lisasview
In my opinion Victor,
Being creative is so important, and what better way than to write what you feel down so you can look at it...
As you did not speak of a structure to your words I am guessing it is freestyle.
Thank you for the read,
Lisasview
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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In my opinion Victor,
Being creative is so important, and what better way than to write what you feel down so you can look at it...
As you did not speak of a structure to your words I am guessing it is freestyle.
Thank you for the read,
Lisasview
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Yes, I?m strictly free form.
What else could a rebel be?
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For sure!!
Comment from Frank Malley
Familiarity may not breed contempt, but it can create the blahs and the hard corners of expectations that too often aren't met. Long relationships have challenges, but the narrator in this poem finds the love that's present sufficient, however imperfect. His lines hint at the discords of familiarity, but also present pathways for connection and solution. Breaking up is hard to do, to quote Neil Sedaka.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Familiarity may not breed contempt, but it can create the blahs and the hard corners of expectations that too often aren't met. Long relationships have challenges, but the narrator in this poem finds the love that's present sufficient, however imperfect. His lines hint at the discords of familiarity, but also present pathways for connection and solution. Breaking up is hard to do, to quote Neil Sedaka.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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What a completely insightful review. Thank you.
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All the best, Victor. Frank
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
There seems to be a lot of regret here for the fluency, elasticity of the 'you' that used to be. Now a divide through age and pride but still a man in love and trying. I enjoyed the free flow of your reflective and poignant verse and particularly liked the 4th stanza which I found very moving. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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There seems to be a lot of regret here for the fluency, elasticity of the 'you' that used to be. Now a divide through age and pride but still a man in love and trying. I enjoyed the free flow of your reflective and poignant verse and particularly liked the 4th stanza which I found very moving. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you for reading me.
Comment from Julie Helms
What comes through this poem: relationships aren't easy and require compromise and get messy. But you persist. Interesting format on this. I enjoyed it! Julie.
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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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What comes through this poem: relationships aren't easy and require compromise and get messy. But you persist. Interesting format on this. I enjoyed it! Julie.
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Julie.
Comment from royowen
I've travelled the world, and guess what? People don't differ, they still dream, strive, hope, try to be the best they can be, dreams, schemes and aspirations, that marks folk, wherever, whoever and whatever they spare, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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I've travelled the world, and guess what? People don't differ, they still dream, strive, hope, try to be the best they can be, dreams, schemes and aspirations, that marks folk, wherever, whoever and whatever they spare, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Oh Roy, I'm up way too late, but...
I love you and thank you.
Doug
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Most welcome dear friend
