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Fantasy based on the intersection of two worlds.
22 total reviews
Comment from
Iza Deleanu
Nice chapter Teo and Echo together on a family tour. And of course lots of emotions from the beginning of of their relationship. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
Hi Iza, thank you for following these chapters. It's helpful to have reviewers that consistently hang on to help you improve.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from
Sally Law
That's it, she meeting the family! She's in for sure. The new princess of Concorde Valley. I feel like it will be a wild ride though. I'm sticking like glue to this one!
Flawless perfection, my friend. Love, love, love it!
Sending you my best today as always, and love across the bridge,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
Thank you so much for being on the story so quickly. I think she'll like the family and visa versa, but they may be a little more intense than she's used to, lol. Action is going to start back soon as well, but some more fun first.
Thanks for the six stars and wonderful supportive review, dear friend.
Love across the bridge,
Rhonda
reply by Sally Law on 08-Jan-2024
My pleasure as always, my friend. Thank you for sharing. Love across the bridge,
Sal xoxo
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