Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and alliteration.
-You establish the premise very well
in the opening lines.
-You also show how connections are made
when writing and expressing your feelings.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023

thank you pam :-)

reply by Pam (respa) on 27-Dec-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I can remember someone once saying that it's not so much what's written in the page but what inferred between the lines that really counts, that's the art of good writing, beautifully written my friend, happy new year, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023

thank you roy :-)

reply by royowen on 27-Dec-2023

My pleasure

Comment from ccarlucci65

Excellent

Very mysterious. Flows nicely. I like the metaphor of "words falling across the page" and it makes me wonder what the secrets might be :) Great Job!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023

hehe thank you lucci :-)

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes - a quiet, reflective short format poem for the ABC poetry contest reminding the reader of the fruits, so to speak, of the activity of writing and especially of writing poetry

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023

thank you zanya :-)

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I enjoyed this form very much. You have demonstrated in it a real beauty for writing. It's very creative and it flows as well when read loud I wish you a very happy new year and may God bless you with all your decisions and with your writing, and good luck in the contest. Patricia.

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 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023

thank you patricia :-)

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

Excellent poem for mood. I love the whole idea of what is left unsaid...it can be just as powerful as what was said (written). Good luck with the contest!

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 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023

thank you julie :)