A Portal Opens -Part Two
A brain injury opens a connection with another world.24 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I would love to see you be on a jury to not only hear the evidence presented but also the thoughts passing through the naysayers disageeing with the facts.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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I would love to see you be on a jury to not only hear the evidence presented but also the thoughts passing through the naysayers disageeing with the facts.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Well, I've been on a jury before for six weeks and I disagreed with almost everyone there, who wanted to punish someone with lengthy jail time, not because they had done so much, but as an example of what might happen if anyone else tried it. It wasn't pretty. I wouldn't want to ever be on another jury.
Comment from jim vecchio
Sorry-Only five stars left! Should go straight to the top in the contest! I enjoyed this so much and look forward to the next installment. You write in a very believable style, just like it was one of your family's stories. All your writing leaves me wanting for more!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Sorry-Only five stars left! Should go straight to the top in the contest! I enjoyed this so much and look forward to the next installment. You write in a very believable style, just like it was one of your family's stories. All your writing leaves me wanting for more!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Thank you Jim. I really appreciate your review and comments. I guess I don't know another way to write except to try to make it believable.
I'm glad you like it.
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You have a great writing style. Stick to it!
Comment from patcelaw
This was a fantastic story that you've told. I was mesmerized by the whole thing as I listen to it all the way through. I wish you the very best in the contest, and I also wish you a very merry Christmas and a happy happy new
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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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This was a fantastic story that you've told. I was mesmerized by the whole thing as I listen to it all the way through. I wish you the very best in the contest, and I also wish you a very merry Christmas and a happy happy new
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Comment Written 21-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Thank you Patricia. I'm glad you like the story. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas and New Year.
Beth
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
If this is fiction, and you hit your head so hard, you have a mentality of knowing what will happen next. But if this story is nonfiction, I'd probably leave a light on in my bedroom. Rather scary scenes.
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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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If this is fiction, and you hit your head so hard, you have a mentality of knowing what will happen next. But if this story is nonfiction, I'd probably leave a light on in my bedroom. Rather scary scenes.
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Comment Written 21-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Thank you Rosemary. Yes it is fiction but the part about the part about the steering wheel being jerked from the hand of the driver isn't fiction. I was in the car with my daughter when that actually happened and prevented a bad wreck. I believe in miricles.
