Lace Hearts
Free Verse club entry42 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Lace Hearts, is a work that a child would love to find when pondering the relationship that exists between the chief-cook-and-bottlewasher and the heir/heiress apparent.
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This poem, Lace Hearts, is a work that a child would love to find when pondering the relationship that exists between the chief-cook-and-bottlewasher and the heir/heiress apparent.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
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Bill, thank you so much for your kind words - they always bring me a smile!
Xo
Jessica
Comment from JSD
Oh this is heartbreaking and beautiful. Obviously it hurts more when I can't see my daughter, but not your fault. Your perfect choice of words strikes such a chord in me. Thank you.
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Oh this is heartbreaking and beautiful. Obviously it hurts more when I can't see my daughter, but not your fault. Your perfect choice of words strikes such a chord in me. Thank you.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I can't imagine what you must be going through- my heart hurts for you. Sending endless prayers! Xo
Jess
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning Jessica,
What a lovely use of the word LACE... I just love it. Lace brings about all the feeling in your delightful poem.... The image is rather amazing as well...
I wish you the very best of luck in the upcoming event.
Lisa
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Good morning Jessica,
What a lovely use of the word LACE... I just love it. Lace brings about all the feeling in your delightful poem.... The image is rather amazing as well...
I wish you the very best of luck in the upcoming event.
Lisa
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Lisa! Xo
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You are always welcome,
Lisa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I too remember those special moments and there is nothing quite like nurturing another human being inside us. It is the ultÃmate miracle of life and I enjoyed your fine free-write Jessica, love Dolly x
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I too remember those special moments and there is nothing quite like nurturing another human being inside us. It is the ultÃmate miracle of life and I enjoyed your fine free-write Jessica, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Dolly! Xo
Comment from jim vecchio
This was so beautiful and sensitively written. With my wife gone, I thank God she left me with aq daughter I will always love, as you, your child. You are a very adept writer at free verse. (before I could send this, my daughter called to say she loves me!)
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This was so beautiful and sensitively written. With my wife gone, I thank God she left me with aq daughter I will always love, as you, your child. You are a very adept writer at free verse. (before I could send this, my daughter called to say she loves me!)
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
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Aw, Jim! That is so sweet. Your daughter is lucky to have you, too!
Xo
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Since I've been in the hospital a lot this year, if I don't answer the phone, she thinks something happened to me!
Comment from Mintybee
This is a beautiful poem about motherhood. It's full of love and tenderness. A mother always remembers those wonderful moments of their child's childhood.
Mintybee
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This is a beautiful poem about motherhood. It's full of love and tenderness. A mother always remembers those wonderful moments of their child's childhood.
Mintybee
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much! Xo:)
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nicely done ode to childbirth and children everywhere. I like the image chosen and like how you weave in various lines and images to weave a complex story.
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nicely done ode to childbirth and children everywhere. I like the image chosen and like how you weave in various lines and images to weave a complex story.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
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Thanks so much, Jake!
Xo
Comment from Daylily
A mothers love for a child is one of the sweetest things on earth. No matter how old they get, they will always be your special little o
This is a lovely poem about treasured memories tucked carefully into a box for safekeeping--and taken out and enjoyed over and over again.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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A mothers love for a child is one of the sweetest things on earth. No matter how old they get, they will always be your special little o
This is a lovely poem about treasured memories tucked carefully into a box for safekeeping--and taken out and enjoyed over and over again.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you kindly xoxo
Comment from gramalot8
This is a vrry beautiful lovely tribute to the love of a mother for her child. Your free verse was easily read and flowed nicely. I loved how you took us on the journey through the child growing up and the different ways the Mother felt the continuous love.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
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This is a vrry beautiful lovely tribute to the love of a mother for her child. Your free verse was easily read and flowed nicely. I loved how you took us on the journey through the child growing up and the different ways the Mother felt the continuous love.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from Yusita
I don't know what to say besides "I'm blown away". This is one of the most beautiful poems I've read. It's so heartfelt, every line so full of meaning and adoring love... I could cry. I became a mother last year, so this poem stirs my heart in a deep and special way. I also noticed and liked how everything revolves around lace, in a sense, and you end with "forever laced in all my love". Just lovely.
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I don't know what to say besides "I'm blown away". This is one of the most beautiful poems I've read. It's so heartfelt, every line so full of meaning and adoring love... I could cry. I became a mother last year, so this poem stirs my heart in a deep and special way. I also noticed and liked how everything revolves around lace, in a sense, and you end with "forever laced in all my love". Just lovely.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Your kind words mean the world to me!! Congratulations on your little one, enjoy every second! I'm so happy this spoke to you. Thank you! Xoxo
Jessica