Grasping the Elusive Dream
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I've always missed your family stories so I really enjoyed catching up here. But I'm so sorry to hear about all your troubles along the way. It's always seemed that life has been very eventful but, there again, with four children, that's hardly surprising.But you've clearly been an absolute rock, Beth! So organised and practical! There are some small edits: They quickly backed up and cha(n)ged directions; your last 3 lines have repetition throughout. Thanks for sharing another well written chapter. Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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I've always missed your family stories so I really enjoyed catching up here. But I'm so sorry to hear about all your troubles along the way. It's always seemed that life has been very eventful but, there again, with four children, that's hardly surprising.But you've clearly been an absolute rock, Beth! So organised and practical! There are some small edits: They quickly backed up and cha(n)ged directions; your last 3 lines have repetition throughout. Thanks for sharing another well written chapter. Debbie
Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Thank you Debbie. My daughter has been driving me nuts to finish the New Orleans year even though I was having more fun entering contests and other thing so I finally worked on it. I'd corrected the first error and I have no idea what happened to cause the other but I'm glad you caught. it was that before cut and pasted.
Comment from patcelaw
Talking about the daughter getting in the car and releasing the break and going backwards into the traffic you say the people saw the situation and they charged directions I think you meant changed to directions.
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I Very much enjoyed listening to your story and it was a traumatic time for all of you as a family. I'm sure. Have a good day and have a very merry Christmas. Patricia.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Talking about the daughter getting in the car and releasing the break and going backwards into the traffic you say the people saw the situation and they charged directions I think you meant changed to directions.
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I Very much enjoyed listening to your story and it was a traumatic time for all of you as a family. I'm sure. Have a good day and have a very merry Christmas. Patricia.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Thank you Patricia. I'm glad you liked it and I appreciate you noticing the typo. I hope you have a Merry Christmas, also.
Beth
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Mercy sakes alive. I never had a big fire, but, we had Hurricane Harvey which flooded our house. I have moved a lot. And my kids have done many dumb things in their youth. But without conflict, there is no peace. I repeat that to myself over and over sometimes. hahaha Good story. Karen
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Mercy sakes alive. I never had a big fire, but, we had Hurricane Harvey which flooded our house. I have moved a lot. And my kids have done many dumb things in their youth. But without conflict, there is no peace. I repeat that to myself over and over sometimes. hahaha Good story. Karen
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
Beth