Colorful Delight
5-7-5 This bird captivates me.23 total reviews
Comment from Jacob1395
I've always thought that hummingbirds are really beautiful birds, and I loved how you described them in your writing. It is always a joy to see one. A well written piece. I enjoyed reading it.
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I've always thought that hummingbirds are really beautiful birds, and I loved how you described them in your writing. It is always a joy to see one. A well written piece. I enjoyed reading it.
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Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
Comment from Navada
This is a stunning visual image and you've captured it effectively in your chosen haiku form. I like the dual inference of the word "uplifting" and the descriptive word "iridescent" to describe the bird's beauty and movement. Good luck for the contest.
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This is a stunning visual image and you've captured it effectively in your chosen haiku form. I like the dual inference of the word "uplifting" and the descriptive word "iridescent" to describe the bird's beauty and movement. Good luck for the contest.
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Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
Comment from Michael Groover
Your haiku beautifully captures the essence of a hummingbird with just a few words. The imagery of the hummingbird hovering with iridescent wingbeats is vivid and enchanting. It portrays the delicate and captivating nature of these tiny creatures. The haiku is concise yet impactful, evoking a sense of wonder and appreciation for the beauty of nature. Well done!
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Your haiku beautifully captures the essence of a hummingbird with just a few words. The imagery of the hummingbird hovering with iridescent wingbeats is vivid and enchanting. It portrays the delicate and captivating nature of these tiny creatures. The haiku is concise yet impactful, evoking a sense of wonder and appreciation for the beauty of nature. Well done!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023