Miranda's Trouble In Paradise
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Must Be Cold"Miranda tries to find Dougie.
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Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nicely written.
Only thing, I'd like Farley to have had a little more money in his wallet. Sending his wife forty-five bucks outta be about half enough to mean something.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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Nicely written.
Only thing, I'd like Farley to have had a little more money in his wallet. Sending his wife forty-five bucks outta be about half enough to mean something.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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He probably started out with more than eighty five. Lol. I'm sure he bought a few favors throughout the night. Thanks for this review, Wayne. Gretchen
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But it's 'your' story! C'mon, give wifey a break and pump his wallet up another 60 or 80 bucks. (grinning face here)
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Lol. You're killing me.