Comment from karenina

Excellent

"What if..." Indeed! You hooked me early on, with Mary and Joseph...

Why not a Covid tent instead of a manger?

GPS and a shining star?

So creative, Ginda!

A most intriguing write at yet another time this world teeters on the edge...

So in need of salvation!

Karenina

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 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023

Thank you and bless you, Karenina, for your kind words.

reply by karenina on 28-Nov-2023

What a great premise for a story!

Comment from Paul Manton

Exceptional

Well, I thought I had written a winner in this competition, but now I'm not so sure! If this wins you will hear my applause from across the Atlantic. I was close to tears at the end, even though I saw what was coming a mile off.
A beautiful representation of the first Christmas with a slow burning reveal only an accomplished writer can achieve. I'm glad you gave us sufficient time to establish a normal 'domestic' adventure; I was fearful that it was an impending tragedy - but it turns into the exact opposite.
Written in 2020? Well worth the resurrection!
Paul

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023

Paul, I so appreciate your positive words for my Christmas story and the six stars to go along with it. Yes, this was written during lock-down but I thought it was about time to share it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

reply by Paul Manton on 28-Nov-2023

Thank you Ginda. May one of us win and the other come second!
Seems fair!
Paul