Thoughts for Sandra-Stoner Mitchell
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Ian's Constellation"Sandra's brother Ian passed away
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Comment from Navada
I really liked your perfect metre, lovely rhymes and uplifting imagery here. The motif of light and the guidance it provides for those of us looking above is a really lovely way to reflect upon the connection between ourselves and those who have gone before us.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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I really liked your perfect metre, lovely rhymes and uplifting imagery here. The motif of light and the guidance it provides for those of us looking above is a really lovely way to reflect upon the connection between ourselves and those who have gone before us.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Hello Rhonda.
Thank you for the marvelous review. The extra star will shine in Ian's constellation.
This one was for Sandra and her brother. Their connection is forever.
Best wishes. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving.
Robert
Comment from Heather Knight
This I super beautiful.
Even though the topic is one of great sadness, I'm happy to see Sandra's book growing.
I like the way you've managed to see the positive side of this. Nobody can spare us the grief, but at least there's hope.
I also spoke about stars, but my post is much worse than yours.
Thanks for your beautiful tribute.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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This I super beautiful.
Even though the topic is one of great sadness, I'm happy to see Sandra's book growing.
I like the way you've managed to see the positive side of this. Nobody can spare us the grief, but at least there's hope.
I also spoke about stars, but my post is much worse than yours.
Thanks for your beautiful tribute.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Hello Heather.
Thank you for the marvelous review. The bright stars will shine in Ian's constellation.
This one was for Sandra and brother. Their connection is forever.
Best wishes to yo. Have a wonderful Holiday.
Robert
Comment from Pam (respa)
Very nice image and presentation, Robert, along with a wonderful title and poem to go with it.
I also like your note, and I know Sandra will appreciate it all, too.
A lovely poem with many comforting images and rhyme. I like your line about "peace in elevation" and the premise that Ian has joined a constellation. It provides a wonderful way to remember someone and know they are at peace, still sharing their light with us. You describe that very well in the second verse. I also like "the majesty of peace" and the concluding verse.
Thank you for sharing it.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Very nice image and presentation, Robert, along with a wonderful title and poem to go with it.
I also like your note, and I know Sandra will appreciate it all, too.
A lovely poem with many comforting images and rhyme. I like your line about "peace in elevation" and the premise that Ian has joined a constellation. It provides a wonderful way to remember someone and know they are at peace, still sharing their light with us. You describe that very well in the second verse. I also like "the majesty of peace" and the concluding verse.
Thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Hello Pa.
Thank you for the marvelous review. The stars will go straight to Ian's constellation. Thanks for noting your favorite lines.
This one was for Sandra and Ian. Their connection is forever.
Best wishes. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving.
Robert
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You are very welcome for the review, Robert. I appreciate your reply. I agree that the connection between Sandra and Ian will last forever. You have a wonderful Thanksgiving, too.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Wow. This was such a hopeful poem. I liked the idea of the soul going up to become part of the stars. Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing. I know Sandra will love it. Gretchen
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Wow. This was such a hopeful poem. I liked the idea of the soul going up to become part of the stars. Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing. I know Sandra will love it. Gretchen
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Hello Gretchen.
Thank you for the wonderful review. The stars will join Ian's constellation.
This one was for Sandra and Ian. Their connection is forever.
Best wishes to you. Have a wonderful holiday season.
Robert
Comment from lyenochka
I loved the "lamppost on each corner of Heaven's pearly gates." It's comforting to think of our loved ones who went ahead shining like stars and reminding us of a bright future beyond this world. Thank you for writing this for Sandra!
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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I loved the "lamppost on each corner of Heaven's pearly gates." It's comforting to think of our loved ones who went ahead shining like stars and reminding us of a bright future beyond this world. Thank you for writing this for Sandra!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Hello Helen.
Thank you for the marvelous review. The stars will go straight to Ian's constellation.
This one was for Sandra and her brother. Their connection is forever.
Best wishes. Have a warm and wonderful Thanksgiving.
Robert
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You have a wonderful Thanksgiving with your family, too!!
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is so beautiful, Robert!
I love the simple comfort this poem exudes. It allows one to feel peace and, in Sandra's case, begin the grieving process from a place where a light burns bright forever. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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This is so beautiful, Robert!
I love the simple comfort this poem exudes. It allows one to feel peace and, in Sandra's case, begin the grieving process from a place where a light burns bright forever. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Hello John.
Thank you for the marvelous review. The stars will join Ian's constellation.
This one was for Sandra and her brother. Their connection is forever.
Best wishes. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving.
Robert
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Happy Thanksgiving, Robert!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A beautifully and sincerely expressed verse complementing that inspiring visual of Ian's Constellation. I've no doubt that this tribute will be of great comfort and encouragement during this difficult time. Well done and my condolences to Sandra. Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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A beautifully and sincerely expressed verse complementing that inspiring visual of Ian's Constellation. I've no doubt that this tribute will be of great comfort and encouragement during this difficult time. Well done and my condolences to Sandra. Debbie
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Hello Debbie.
Thank you for the wonderful review. The stars will go straight to Ian's constellation.
This one was for Sandra and Ian. Their connection is forever.
Best wishes to you. Have a wonderful holiday season.
Robert
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is imaginative, creative, and well written. The presentation is colorful and beautiful, supporting your carefully chosen words. So, ALL of that is so wonderful. But the most significant part of it all is the support. What you have written can soothe a distraught heart. I'm so sure Sandra will be drawn into this incredible imagery and the thought of Ian at Peace.
So impressive!
Alex
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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This is imaginative, creative, and well written. The presentation is colorful and beautiful, supporting your carefully chosen words. So, ALL of that is so wonderful. But the most significant part of it all is the support. What you have written can soothe a distraught heart. I'm so sure Sandra will be drawn into this incredible imagery and the thought of Ian at Peace.
So impressive!
Alex
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Hello Alex.
Thank you for the wonderful review. The stars will join Ian's constellation.
This one was for Sandra and Ian. Their connection is forever.
Best wishes to you. Have a warm and wonderful Thanksgiving.
Robert
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Yes.Thank you! Happy Thanksgiving to you too, Robert!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a wonderful post for Sandra in her hour of need and I thoroughly enjoyed your gentle and melodic words in this soothing post Robert, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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This is a wonderful post for Sandra in her hour of need and I thoroughly enjoyed your gentle and melodic words in this soothing post Robert, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Hello Dolly.
Thank you for the wonderful review. The stars will join Ian's constellation.
This one was for Sandra and brother. Their connection is forever.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
Comment from BethShelby
This is a lovely peom for Sandra. If we can realized who those who have gone on have become a part of a much more wonderful existence free of pain and suffering, it would lighten the dark cloud of sorrow that hangs over the those who love and miss them.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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This is a lovely peom for Sandra. If we can realized who those who have gone on have become a part of a much more wonderful existence free of pain and suffering, it would lighten the dark cloud of sorrow that hangs over the those who love and miss them.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Hello Beth. Thank you for the wonderful review. The stars will go straight to Ian's constellation.
This one was for Sandra and Ian. Their connection is forever.
Best wishes. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving.
Robert