Miranda's Trouble In Paradise
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Star Sixty-nine"Miranda tries to find Dougie.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a lovely make up post Gretchen and you handled it well with your expertise in understanding human relationships, much enjoyed, another fine chapter, lvoe Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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This is a lovely make up post Gretchen and you handled it well with your expertise in understanding human relationships, much enjoyed, another fine chapter, lvoe Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your nice comments. Gretchen
Comment from Lea Tonin1
That was pretty cool. I think your characters are very believable especially Miranda. You have a wonderful fluidic style to your writing.
And your storyline moves on very well without any gaps.
And I get great visuals of people place. I see no issues with grammar sentence structure word choices or subject matter. Great job on a very believable Story thank you so much! Hope you have a great night!
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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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That was pretty cool. I think your characters are very believable especially Miranda. You have a wonderful fluidic style to your writing.
And your storyline moves on very well without any gaps.
And I get great visuals of people place. I see no issues with grammar sentence structure word choices or subject matter. Great job on a very believable Story thank you so much! Hope you have a great night!
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oh, this one's GREAT!!! Miranda told Waylon she loves him, and he returned the feelings. Miranda did the right thing and made up with Mitch, and Mitch returned those feelings. And now she has an ally (a STRONG, law-affiliated variety!!) on Dougie's trail. All is right with the Trouble in Paradise crew. [yes, yes; I'm not naive enough to think it's permanent. Please just let me bask in the fleeting joy, will ya?! Sheesh, you little killjoy!)
Really fantastic chapter, Miss Awesome Author!! [Ohhh! And that reminds me; I keep meaning to ask you this: If I send you my copy of Coffee with Iris, could I please get you to autograph it? This time, I'll use a bubble envelope so the PO doesn't destroy it like it did the last book you wrote!!]
xoxoxoxoxo
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Oh, this one's GREAT!!! Miranda told Waylon she loves him, and he returned the feelings. Miranda did the right thing and made up with Mitch, and Mitch returned those feelings. And now she has an ally (a STRONG, law-affiliated variety!!) on Dougie's trail. All is right with the Trouble in Paradise crew. [yes, yes; I'm not naive enough to think it's permanent. Please just let me bask in the fleeting joy, will ya?! Sheesh, you little killjoy!)
Really fantastic chapter, Miss Awesome Author!! [Ohhh! And that reminds me; I keep meaning to ask you this: If I send you my copy of Coffee with Iris, could I please get you to autograph it? This time, I'll use a bubble envelope so the PO doesn't destroy it like it did the last book you wrote!!]
xoxoxoxoxo
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Of course I will. Thank you for buying it. And thank you for this. I'm glad you like this chapter. I figured once Miranda said I love you to Waylon her walls would crumble and she would be viewing the world through rose colored glasses ... for a little while. Thank you. And congratulations on the win of Secret Admirer. Gretchen
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Thank you for entering me as a contender!! You will never know how that warmed my heart. xoxox
Comment from Wendy G
I am glad that she has managed to get back with Mitch and that she has been honest about her feelings for him. Feeling sorry for Waylon. Your characters are very real. Imperfect and flawed but very relatable. Just as they should be. Well done.
Wendy
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I am glad that she has managed to get back with Mitch and that she has been honest about her feelings for him. Feeling sorry for Waylon. Your characters are very real. Imperfect and flawed but very relatable. Just as they should be. Well done.
Wendy
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Thank you for this. I really am glad the characters are coming across as real. I appreciate this. Gretchen