Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

You're so good at these, John, and I wouldn't mind betting this is another winner! A beautiful introduction with a neat little twist at the end. I love the idea of your napkins being filled with story segments, notes and thoughts. What a charmer! Good luck! (As if you need it!) Debbie

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

Awe. Thank you, Debbie. This is a great review, as always!
Eeesh? it?s late over there across the pond. Have a good night.
John

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Lol I enjoyed this short piece of flash fiction very much and read it a couple of times to make sure I got the message. So the person he described on the napkin was opposite to the lady who was making flirtatious eye contact with him lol. So fickle!!!

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

Thank you do much for reading my entry and sharing your thoughts.
I appreciate it very much.
John

Comment from aryr

Excellent

Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, John. Definitely a gorgeous picture of the brunette and her dog. This was very well done and greatly enjoyed. I liked this one, it was brilliant. Blessings n Peace!!!

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

Alie, thank you so much for this great review and the well contest wishes.
John
(Did I spell your name correctly, I wasn?t sure)

reply by aryr on 13-Nov-2023

Yes you did. You are so welcome, John.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Pomeranians are really good at introducing people to each other. LOL I know this I had one right, Muffin, after I graduated from college and met all sorts of interesting single men. LOL Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

Thank you, Barbara!

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

Cute 75 word story which is never easy. The story might have been a best seller except for that fatal flirtatious eye contact. You couldn't risk being caught with the napkins about her on your person. Nicely done.

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 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

Those napkins would?ve done him in!
Thank you, Beth,

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. I have enjoyed reading your story. It is clear and concise. I like it. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Nice.

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 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, Raul.
John