Guided by Faith
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Chapter 20 A"Can faith guide our path?
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Comment from Teri7
Barbara, This is a great chapter you have penned. So much has happened in this chapter. I just hope little Molly will be o.k. You used great descriptive words. The picture you used looks like a very dangerous animal. I hope it is not what hurt little Molly! Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Barbara, This is a great chapter you have penned. So much has happened in this chapter. I just hope little Molly will be o.k. You used great descriptive words. The picture you used looks like a very dangerous animal. I hope it is not what hurt little Molly! Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nice chapter, Barb. You have set up the possibility of a prowler at Emma's place. We have a good idea who this may be. Hopefully, Molly will be okay.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Nice chapter, Barb. You have set up the possibility of a prowler at Emma's place. We have a good idea who this may be. Hopefully, Molly will be okay.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. We will discover very soon who the bad guy or gal is.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Oh oh oooh! So the picture got me excited about the upcoming read.
Awesome and exciting chapter! Bravo!!! I enjoyed this chapter.
Ready for the next one.
D
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Oh oh oooh! So the picture got me excited about the upcoming read.
Awesome and exciting chapter! Bravo!!! I enjoyed this chapter.
Ready for the next one.
D
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jim Wile
Close call for Molly, and it was very sweet how Ace wanted to stay with her at the vet's. If it isn't one thing, it's another pushing Emma and Seth even closer together. One of these days they'll have to admit they are more than just friends. I just wonder what the precipitating moment will be. You're keeping me on edge here, Barbara. - Jim
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Close call for Molly, and it was very sweet how Ace wanted to stay with her at the vet's. If it isn't one thing, it's another pushing Emma and Seth even closer together. One of these days they'll have to admit they are more than just friends. I just wonder what the precipitating moment will be. You're keeping me on edge here, Barbara. - Jim
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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The moment will come, and hopefully it will be suspenseful and a shock to all. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I had a lump in my throat about Molly and Ace. I hope the little furball makes it. Everyone is seeing the attraction between Seth and Emma, but they are still denying it. But the best relationships start as friendships. Great chapter. Gretchen
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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I had a lump in my throat about Molly and Ace. I hope the little furball makes it. Everyone is seeing the attraction between Seth and Emma, but they are still denying it. But the best relationships start as friendships. Great chapter. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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I agree the best relationships are strong friendships. It takes time to develop that. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from damommy
Now we have to worry about Molly and figure out who was trying to get. Putting new locks on was a good idea. I wish she'd wise up and move in with Seth.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Now we have to worry about Molly and figure out who was trying to get. Putting new locks on was a good idea. I wish she'd wise up and move in with Seth.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. All in good time.
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, this chapter is well written, and everything is step with your proven formula.
notes:
Seth shook his head. "But not sure if [it] was a coyote, wild dog, or mixed."
-add: it
{Jakes hugged} her before he continued,
-Jake hugged
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Hmm, this chapter is well written, and everything is step with your proven formula.
notes:
Seth shook his head. "But not sure if [it] was a coyote, wild dog, or mixed."
-add: it
{Jakes hugged} her before he continued,
-Jake hugged
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and the help. I have made the changes. I appreciate help.
Comment from jmdg1954
This chapter made my eyes water a bit dealing with the coyote attack on Molly. I have three dogs and I would be devastated should something like that happen to one of them.
Other than that, everything seems status quo between Seth and her, and her immaturity.
Thank you for posting...
Cheers,
John
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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This chapter made my eyes water a bit dealing with the coyote attack on Molly. I have three dogs and I would be devastated should something like that happen to one of them.
Other than that, everything seems status quo between Seth and her, and her immaturity.
Thank you for posting...
Cheers,
John
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Emma will grow up, a little.
Comment from Ulla
It's another great c he apter, Barbara. I'm so sorry about the dogs and the vicious attack on Molly. All I can hope for is that she will be okay. Ace really saves her life. Hugs, Ulla xx
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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It's another great c he apter, Barbara. I'm so sorry about the dogs and the vicious attack on Molly. All I can hope for is that she will be okay. Ace really saves her life. Hugs, Ulla xx
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, Ace did save Molly's life.
Comment from judiverse
Emma needs to get serious about finding a job in keeping with her college background. Then she won't have those financial worries. I hope little Molly makes it. I love how Ace wants to stay with her. I have a feeling Molly will recover. It's like Seth hovering over Emma. Seth needs to spend his time trying to find out who's been all these things to Emma. Once that's solved, maybe she can get on with her life and start her career. She needs to mature a bit before she thinks of marriage. You have certainly come up with a variety of problems for Emma--and Seth--to deal with. Very creative. judi
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Emma needs to get serious about finding a job in keeping with her college background. Then she won't have those financial worries. I hope little Molly makes it. I love how Ace wants to stay with her. I have a feeling Molly will recover. It's like Seth hovering over Emma. Seth needs to spend his time trying to find out who's been all these things to Emma. Once that's solved, maybe she can get on with her life and start her career. She needs to mature a bit before she thinks of marriage. You have certainly come up with a variety of problems for Emma--and Seth--to deal with. Very creative. judi
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I can promise Emma is thinking about her future. Something will happen and bring it all into focus for her.
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You're welcome. I'll be curious to see what Emma has in mind. She certainly seems interested in developing reading skills and helping young people with their problems. judi
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All of that will play into what she does accept and where she's taking it.