A Time for War
A Rondelet Poem Contest Entry22 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
It is terrible all the mayhem in the world right now. The Ukraine and Russia, the United States, is literally falling apart and there's war in the middle east, i'm looking around us and can see the signs of destruction.
I think everyone should just get over themselves. You know, and realize that we're one species on 1 planet, so we should be one.
Having said that great poem! Obviously struck a chord with me and the pictures highly appropriate. Well, written and it follows the contest rules exactly. I think it's a strong submission and I wish it's the best day!
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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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It is terrible all the mayhem in the world right now. The Ukraine and Russia, the United States, is literally falling apart and there's war in the middle east, i'm looking around us and can see the signs of destruction.
I think everyone should just get over themselves. You know, and realize that we're one species on 1 planet, so we should be one.
Having said that great poem! Obviously struck a chord with me and the pictures highly appropriate. Well, written and it follows the contest rules exactly. I think it's a strong submission and I wish it's the best day!
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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You're so right. We seem to keep doing the same things over and over again. The old saying about those who forget the past are doomed to repeat it is true. That's where we seem to be today. Thank you for your review and best wishes.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I feel very sad that yet another war has started and tensions are delicate and I am sick of hearing about war. It is a problem in Europe and the Middle East as there are some crazy people in the world who have no respect for mankind, a poignant write for the contest, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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I feel very sad that yet another war has started and tensions are delicate and I am sick of hearing about war. It is a problem in Europe and the Middle East as there are some crazy people in the world who have no respect for mankind, a poignant write for the contest, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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You're right, Dolly. The term 'brotherly love' seems to be more of an oxymoron than a goal this world should be trying to achieve. Unfortunately, that seems to be where we are right now. I appreciate your review.
