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Unforgettable Memory

Still in my mind ...

27 total reviews 
Comment from Sally Law
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Don't feel guilty. I'm a strong swimmer and I would have probably died trying to save them. It's foolish to swim in a desolate place, although I have done the same thing. Jack and I went snorkeling alone in the Bahamas away from everyone. I shudder to think what could have happened if anything had gone wrong.

Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    Thank you for your very understanding review. Greatly appreciated. I often wondered if he was taken by a shark.
    Wendy
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Oh my gosh. That's a heartbreaking thing to witness. Of course, I'm like you about not being a strong swimmer. It would have been two drowned. Sometimes we witness things that change us and all for reasons we may never understand. Stunning and powerful. Good luck in the contest. Gretchen

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    Thank you for your wonderful review, compassionate and understanding. Many thanks too for the six stars, each one greatly valued.
    Wendy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Oh wow, this is quite a story and memory for you! But why would you imagine the very worst? Easy to beat yourself up afterwards when all the facts are known. The truth is, had you gone in with the intention of helping, you may well not be here today. Thank you for sharing this, Wendy, and hopefully giving yourself permission to move on. Take care Debbie.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    If I had gone in I would have been useless, unable to help. But it seemed wrong to just sit there wondering if I was watching some-one drown. Thanks so much for a most understanding review.
    Wendy
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Love the photo, and the story is good. Hate the ending for whoever it was that d r o w n e d. Still, this is an entertaining entry. You should do well in the challenge.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    Thank you Tom. I appreciate your review.
    Wendy
Comment from Paul McFarland
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That's a very sad story, and one that has stayed with you throughout your life. I have had a few traumatic experiences that have stayed with me, but thankfully they did not involve anyone's death. We are competitors in this contest. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    Thank you Paul, and best of luck to you too. I apprecaie your words.
    Wendy
Comment from BethShelby
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That would be a shock to realize you watched as someone drowned and I'm sure guilt might be something you would feel, but at the same time in was unfounded. There was not anything you could have done to help. It might have been coincidence and what you saw might not have been the drowning. I would think the dot in the distance would have become very agitated if their companion had just drowned. Good story for the contest.

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 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    Thank you Beth. I appreciate your review. I know I could not have done anything to help, but later I felt guilty for just sitting while it happened.
    Wend
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Well written.
And had you, by any chance made it out that far, you would have 1) been too late, and 2) probably have been accidentally drowned yourself.
It is sad, though.
Best wishes.

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 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    Thanks so much Wayne. I appreciate your review. You are right, but even knowing that I later felt I ought to have tried to do something rather than just sit there.
    Wendy