Guided by Faith
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Comment from royowen
Seth is certainly mellowing and the more deeply he falls in love, the more protective he'll become, and, does Peggy have a thing for Seth? This is a great post and story, and as always, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Seth is certainly mellowing and the more deeply he falls in love, the more protective he'll become, and, does Peggy have a thing for Seth? This is a great post and story, and as always, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Barbara,
Thank you for making time to post this chapter? I love the book.
I love this chapter. Seth is changing due to his love for Emma. He's not bossy anymore and I love the way he protects Emma. It's the way he shows his love for her. Peggy is so dislikeable. I hope she goes away or at least gets the message.
I used to make friendships bracelets all the time. Now I want to do it again. I bet my grandson would love it.
Well done. Take it easy.
MariVal Bayles
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Hello, Barbara,
Thank you for making time to post this chapter? I love the book.
I love this chapter. Seth is changing due to his love for Emma. He's not bossy anymore and I love the way he protects Emma. It's the way he shows his love for her. Peggy is so dislikeable. I hope she goes away or at least gets the message.
I used to make friendships bracelets all the time. Now I want to do it again. I bet my grandson would love it.
Well done. Take it easy.
MariVal Bayles
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I'm sure your grandson would love to make them.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. I am a little confused. Is Seth teaching the Apostles Creed class? I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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This is another excellent chapter. I am a little confused. Is Seth teaching the Apostles Creed class? I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, he is for young adults.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I don't see mistakes, Friend! You are very dedicated to your story(ies), and I'm glad because I was hoping to see your latest. This was app great chapter. Seth is always there. I'm glad Emma has such a support system. As always, such good writing and authentic dialogues. Hope you're enjoying you trip if your still there and Safe Travels!
With love,
Alexandra :)) x
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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I don't see mistakes, Friend! You are very dedicated to your story(ies), and I'm glad because I was hoping to see your latest. This was app great chapter. Seth is always there. I'm glad Emma has such a support system. As always, such good writing and authentic dialogues. Hope you're enjoying you trip if your still there and Safe Travels!
With love,
Alexandra :)) x
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
She enters to room with, "Sorry, I'm late. I couldn't decide what to wear." She a piece of work.
At least Seth and Emma are getting along swimmingly, but I have a feeling Peggy is about to muck that up.
No spags jumped out at me this time. Perhaps traveling and posting agrees with you:-)
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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She enters to room with, "Sorry, I'm late. I couldn't decide what to wear." She a piece of work.
At least Seth and Emma are getting along swimmingly, but I have a feeling Peggy is about to muck that up.
No spags jumped out at me this time. Perhaps traveling and posting agrees with you:-)
xo
Pam
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
The story is coming along very nicely, Barb. Bring Peggy back into the picture at this time is a good idea. You have left the reader in a state of anticipation, which is good.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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The story is coming along very nicely, Barb. Bring Peggy back into the picture at this time is a good idea. You have left the reader in a state of anticipation, which is good.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Things are really getting interesting now. With Emma's old boyfriend Ronald in town, he could be the one who's been stalking her. Seth should get on Ronald's background instead of fretting and hovering over Emma. So Peggy's signed up for the Apostles Creed class, more of her effort to make a play for Seth, even though he's shown no interest in her. Her comment about not being able to decide what to wear to the class says all you need to know about her. Interesting details about the friendship bracelets. Sorry, I've managed to use all my sixes already. This really deserves one. judi
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Things are really getting interesting now. With Emma's old boyfriend Ronald in town, he could be the one who's been stalking her. Seth should get on Ronald's background instead of fretting and hovering over Emma. So Peggy's signed up for the Apostles Creed class, more of her effort to make a play for Seth, even though he's shown no interest in her. Her comment about not being able to decide what to wear to the class says all you need to know about her. Interesting details about the friendship bracelets. Sorry, I've managed to use all my sixes already. This really deserves one. judi
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. No problem with the six.
Comment from estory
This chapter seemed to have a gradually build up of tension in it, as the mysterious Ronnie from high school shows up and confronts Emma. Seth is watching carefully from a little distance. The concern on both is evident. There's an undercurrent of suspense under the surface of the small talk, and you are the master of that. We have to wait and see what this character will be up to, but from that cold shoulder she gave him in the restaurant, it is sure that she doesn't want him around, she's asking Seth to stay close by, and he is up to no good. estory
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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This chapter seemed to have a gradually build up of tension in it, as the mysterious Ronnie from high school shows up and confronts Emma. Seth is watching carefully from a little distance. The concern on both is evident. There's an undercurrent of suspense under the surface of the small talk, and you are the master of that. We have to wait and see what this character will be up to, but from that cold shoulder she gave him in the restaurant, it is sure that she doesn't want him around, she's asking Seth to stay close by, and he is up to no good. estory
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love how you guys can blame God for a change of heart, if we said this in the UK they would lock you up! But it is accepted over there to refer to God as your guide all the time. Back to the story. I enjoyed the light hearted dialogue and the way your story is progressing Barbara. I sounds like Seth has a rival too, a great chapter Barbara, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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I love how you guys can blame God for a change of heart, if we said this in the UK they would lock you up! But it is accepted over there to refer to God as your guide all the time. Back to the story. I enjoyed the light hearted dialogue and the way your story is progressing Barbara. I sounds like Seth has a rival too, a great chapter Barbara, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Accepting God is under attack over here not too. Some people have been beaten up, and got away with it, for praying in public
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That is terrible Barbara, how awful. We sometimes have muslims praying to mecca and they are never attacked. We also have people promoting the Bible in our town and they are never ostracised. Anyone saying that God made them do something is a different matter, especially when the Police is involved. Love Dolly x x x
Comment from damommy
That Peggy Barton! She needs to be run out of town before she causes a lot of trouble. I hope she doesn't get in cahoots with that Ronnie! I wouldn't put anything past her. Maybe she's the reason he's back in town. Hmmmm.
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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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That Peggy Barton! She needs to be run out of town before she causes a lot of trouble. I hope she doesn't get in cahoots with that Ronnie! I wouldn't put anything past her. Maybe she's the reason he's back in town. Hmmmm.
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
