Cloud Meditations
Relaxing while looking at clouds. (1-5-5-9)26 total reviews
Comment from Michele Harber
Nicely done, Lisa May. I find this type of poem difficult to do, but you seem to have mastered it beautifully. I like how you carried the bed theme through "pillows" and "restful transport." Good luck in the contest.
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Nicely done, Lisa May. I find this type of poem difficult to do, but you seem to have mastered it beautifully. I like how you carried the bed theme through "pillows" and "restful transport." Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
Comment from jim vecchio
This had an eye-catching image and your words supported it. You seemed to have no difficulty with the correct number of syllables. Your final line was very strong and summed up your message well.
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This had an eye-catching image and your words supported it. You seemed to have no difficulty with the correct number of syllables. Your final line was very strong and summed up your message well.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I very much enjoyed reading this. It might be because I am always arranging pillows a certain way to sleep more comfortably. There is, of course, some 'c' alliteration with 'Clouds carry' as well. Nothing to improve on that I can think of. Good luck in that contest!
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I very much enjoyed reading this. It might be because I am always arranging pillows a certain way to sleep more comfortably. There is, of course, some 'c' alliteration with 'Clouds carry' as well. Nothing to improve on that I can think of. Good luck in that contest!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
Comment from lyenochka
I love watching clouds, too. We nephophiles need to stick together. You should come visit as this place has the best view of the skies and so many interesting clouds to imagine about. Best wishes in the contest!
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I love watching clouds, too. We nephophiles need to stick together. You should come visit as this place has the best view of the skies and so many interesting clouds to imagine about. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
Comment from Douglas Goff
What a warm, fuzzy and somewhat fluffy piece of writing!
I think this is a perfect piece for the Four Line Poetry Contest.
Very fun! Thank you for sharing. May you have good fortunes in your upcoming competition.
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What a warm, fuzzy and somewhat fluffy piece of writing!
I think this is a perfect piece for the Four Line Poetry Contest.
Very fun! Thank you for sharing. May you have good fortunes in your upcoming competition.
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good. You also use descriptive words, well, that draw in a reader. Best wishes!
Alexandra
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This is an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good. You also use descriptive words, well, that draw in a reader. Best wishes!
Alexandra
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2023