Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

I think Mitch is still in love with Miranda after that light show. LOL. I know I keep focusing on those two, but they were such a promising couple.

Bill is the young cop that got shot by Missy, right? If I had to guess (which I always try to do) I'd say he's up to something else other than cheating on Rita. It's just a guess. Great chapter, Gretchen. Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023

Miranda and Mitch are very much involved. But Tyler was the cop that got shot. Bill wasn't in the last one. But keep guessing. I'm never sure what's going to happen either. Lol. Gretchen

reply by John Ciarmello on 10-Sep-2023

Ahh! That's right! Well, then, I think Bill is cheating. Hahaha! Tyler wouldn't have cheated. :)

reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023

Lol. We shall see. Miranda and I need to do some investigating. Gretchen

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Doesn't sound too good for Rita. Love the humour in her relationship with Waylon. They know each other pretty well by now. Missy is delusional if she thinks M will write back typo her. Good. An added complication which will definitely keep me on the hook.
Wendy

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023

Thanks, Wendy. Glad you are going to give Miranda another shot. Appreciate the review. Gretchen

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is an excellent story.. I enjoyed reading it. Your entire presentation is good. You use descriptive words that draw in a reader and with authentic dialogue also. Best wishes!

Alexandra



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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023

Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying this. Gretchen