The Milk Maid and the Cow
A double verse limerick.23 total reviews
Comment from JSD
Excellent and hilarious verse. I definitely expected a swear word and you played on that beautifully. Maybe tailed off slightly at the end but I wish you all the best for the competition.
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Excellent and hilarious verse. I definitely expected a swear word and you played on that beautifully. Maybe tailed off slightly at the end but I wish you all the best for the competition.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Well done! You've written a very successful stacked limerick and the humor lies in holding back on the word that naturally comes to mind. Very clever.
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Well done! You've written a very successful stacked limerick and the humor lies in holding back on the word that naturally comes to mind. Very clever.
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Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. SO good!! Clever and very humorous - one can't help but laugh. The rhymes and the limerick metre are both very good. I wish you the best for the contest. Should do well.
Wendy
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Lol. SO good!! Clever and very humorous - one can't help but laugh. The rhymes and the limerick metre are both very good. I wish you the best for the contest. Should do well.
Wendy
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Comment Written 20-Aug-2023