Four Horse Island
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Searching the Ship"Marooned on an island with 4 horses and a goat
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Comment from GWHARGIS
This is so gooood!! I love just the mystery that the reader is aware of just likeAva. Same time. It's like we climbed out of the debris at the same time. Now she knows she's not alone, but what the heck is with her. I love how you describe what she's seeing. Doing this first person point of view is perfect too. Great second part. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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This is so gooood!! I love just the mystery that the reader is aware of just likeAva. Same time. It's like we climbed out of the debris at the same time. Now she knows she's not alone, but what the heck is with her. I love how you describe what she's seeing. Doing this first person point of view is perfect too. Great second part. Gretchen
Comment Written 23-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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Hi Gretchen,
Thank you for such an encouraging reivew. I apprciate the six stars, but even more the kind comments.
Debi
