The Beauty Busy-ness
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Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Without the bees buzzing, there would be no blossoms blooming!
Love the alliteration you've used. Nothing but the letter B giving us the buzz! Beautiful presentation. Good luck!
Pam
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Without the bees buzzing, there would be no blossoms blooming!
Love the alliteration you've used. Nothing but the letter B giving us the buzz! Beautiful presentation. Good luck!
Pam
Comment Written 06-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Thanks so much Pam. A fun short one. Thanks too for the good wishes.
Wendy
Comment from Sally Law
Oh, this is really bee-u-tifully composed and illustrated in super short verse poetry, Wendy. A sure contender for the upcoming contest. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes before the committee.
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Oh, this is really bee-u-tifully composed and illustrated in super short verse poetry, Wendy. A sure contender for the upcoming contest. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes before the committee.
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 06-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Thank you Sal for such a lovely review and for the good wishes. Always appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I'm tickled pink with your pink presentation! The alliteration is complete with a beginning 'B' for every word, and the picture and background only add to the perfection!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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I'm tickled pink with your pink presentation! The alliteration is complete with a beginning 'B' for every word, and the picture and background only add to the perfection!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Wow, thank you Verna. That?s so lovely of you to offer six stars! Much appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Jesse James Doty
They certainly do! Bees buzz and flowers need them to pollinate the blossoms all the time!
I love this 2-4-2 poem and what it tells us about nature's love!
This is excellently done and for the whole of nature, it is good!
Jesse
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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They certainly do! Bees buzz and flowers need them to pollinate the blossoms all the time!
I love this 2-4-2 poem and what it tells us about nature's love!
This is excellently done and for the whole of nature, it is good!
Jesse
Comment Written 06-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Thank you Jesse! I was hoping people would think of the role and significance of bees! We need them.
Wendy
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Yes, we do!
Jesse
Comment from Sarah Tummey
From the title, I thought the poem might be about how being busy sounds attractive, but who you are as a person is more important. It was unexpected to read about bees and the beauty of flowers to them.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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From the title, I thought the poem might be about how being busy sounds attractive, but who you are as a person is more important. It was unexpected to read about bees and the beauty of flowers to them.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Thank you Sarah. This tiny one was a prompt to celebrate the interaction of bees and flowers, a mutual blessing and so important in the food supply chain.
Wendy
Comment from royowen
An excellent entry in this 2/4/2 poetry contest, oh yes indeed, they say that there not as many bees around like there used to be some years ago, well dine, good lunch in the contest, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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An excellent entry in this 2/4/2 poetry contest, oh yes indeed, they say that there not as many bees around like there used to be some years ago, well dine, good lunch in the contest, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Thank you Roy. We desperately need to look after our bees for the health and well being of our food supply chain. The role of bees is essential.
Wendy.
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That?s true
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That?s true
Comment from Paul McFarland
Okay. I'm going to try for one hundred fifty words. I'm getting there. That was a really magnificent example of alliteration, Wendy. I think I did it.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Okay. I'm going to try for one hundred fifty words. I'm getting there. That was a really magnificent example of alliteration, Wendy. I think I did it.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Nah. Not even close. You only did 150 characters! I was expecting a whole paragraph of 150 words!! 😃
I?ll give you a hint. The space bar works well when one gets stuck for words. Thank you so much for reviewing my eight little syllables. Love it.
Wendy
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I must have been sleeping when I wrote that.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-2, The Beauty Busy-ness, has the proper formatting and adds alliteration to bring the boing-ing bead blender into focus for better banalysis.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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This 2-4-2, The Beauty Busy-ness, has the proper formatting and adds alliteration to bring the boing-ing bead blender into focus for better banalysis.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Lol. That?s so clever. 😄
Love it. Thank you for review my eight little syllables.
Wendy
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well done, as normal. Still, the shorter the challenge, the harder it must be to compose something sensibly. Further, the people who read and then try to comment, need to write far more than the author. That is a mystery and should be addressed by the people in charge to ameliorate.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Well done, as normal. Still, the shorter the challenge, the harder it must be to compose something sensibly. Further, the people who read and then try to comment, need to write far more than the author. That is a mystery and should be addressed by the people in charge to ameliorate.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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You are so right. I totally agree. The reviewer needs to be very creative to get 150 characters written about eight syllables. 😄
Thank you for trying. I appreciate it.
Wendy
Comment from GWHARGIS
As soon as I saw the title I thought of a beauty parlor. The old fashioned kind. Black and white tile floor, air thick with hair spray. Then I saw the picture of the flower. I got confused. Read it. Saw the word Bee. Immediately, saw the beauty parlor again with bugs sitting in chairs getting bee hive hairdos. Fun poem. (Bear in mind, I read and reviewed before my first cup of coffee.) Gretchen
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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As soon as I saw the title I thought of a beauty parlor. The old fashioned kind. Black and white tile floor, air thick with hair spray. Then I saw the picture of the flower. I got confused. Read it. Saw the word Bee. Immediately, saw the beauty parlor again with bugs sitting in chairs getting bee hive hairdos. Fun poem. (Bear in mind, I read and reviewed before my first cup of coffee.) Gretchen
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Lol. What a fun review! A tiny piece here, to give readers some respite from my long pieces. I hoped it would prompt readers to celebrate bees and their role and significance. Thanks so much for reviewing.
Wendy