Saving Mr. Calvin
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Comment from Jay Squires
Interesting! Are you from California, Jim? Or do you just dislike our Governor that much, LOL. I DO think we will see him running for President some day. And he does have a lovely smile.
Wow! What a preface to your story, and then, while the golf cart is in midair, we get to mosey around the back story. It's gonna be a long mosey if the golf cart's destination leads to "certain death". A fun start, though.
Jay
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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Interesting! Are you from California, Jim? Or do you just dislike our Governor that much, LOL. I DO think we will see him running for President some day. And he does have a lovely smile.
Wow! What a preface to your story, and then, while the golf cart is in midair, we get to mosey around the back story. It's gonna be a long mosey if the golf cart's destination leads to "certain death". A fun start, though.
Jay
Comment Written 28-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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The latter. I'm originally from New York, but I've been a midwesterner and now a southerner for the last 50 years. I do have a brother who lives in San Jose, though.
So glad you were entertained by the prologue, Jay, and thanks for the great review and the stars.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Wow
I don't know what to say.
Confusing? Futuristic?
Newsome '32
Hopefully, the next chapter will offer clarity. Until, Happy Trails to you.
Tvyhyfrfyhtdrfygrdthydefyhy
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
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Wow
I don't know what to say.
Confusing? Futuristic?
Newsome '32
Hopefully, the next chapter will offer clarity. Until, Happy Trails to you.
Tvyhyfrfyhtdrfygrdthydefyhy
Comment Written 28-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
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Patience. It will all become clear.
Comment from lancellot
Well, that was certainly an unexpected part one of two. I suppose the jump back in time will explain why Kevin was on a murder suicide mission. Good one, with Newsom becoming president. It could happen. Also, nice way to explain the golfing terms to the reader through dialogue.
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"Bob Evans at 11:00.["]
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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Well, that was certainly an unexpected part one of two. I suppose the jump back in time will explain why Kevin was on a murder suicide mission. Good one, with Newsom becoming president. It could happen. Also, nice way to explain the golfing terms to the reader through dialogue.
notes:
"Bob Evans at 11:00.["]
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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Glad you enjoyed it, Lance. I like that: murder suicide mission!
Thanks for the good catch too.
Comment from Douglas Goff
I love the great names of your characters Jim. I looked hard for mistakes and found none.
Don't worry about gollf. It will never ever go away. It will just be for rich men like how it is now for vacations, gasoline, hunting and eating out.
D
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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I love the great names of your characters Jim. I looked hard for mistakes and found none.
Don't worry about gollf. It will never ever go away. It will just be for rich men like how it is now for vacations, gasoline, hunting and eating out.
D
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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I'm delighted by your review, D. I am worried about golf and hope I will have found a solution by the end that proves you wrong in your prediction.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I did find the prologue a bit complicated as I know nothing about golf jargon. Did you mention red headed girls here Jim? I must have missed that? Good luck with your new novel, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
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I did find the prologue a bit complicated as I know nothing about golf jargon. Did you mention red headed girls here Jim? I must have missed that? Good luck with your new novel, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
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You didn't miss it. The first redhead will be coming either in the next chapter or the next. Just wanted to warn the readers of my first couple of novels so they won't say, "Another redhead? Jeesh!"
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Ha ha ha x x x