Comment from jake cosmos aller

Excellent

great photo of a great musician. with so many of the greats dying off it is a matter of time before he will pass on. I saw him and Ray Charles play in Korea in 1992. Great show man ship.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023

Thanks Jake.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

I love this - The theme, image and your sentiments are excellently done. But the second line is the same syllable count as the third - 7 syllables. I'm giving you 5* stars because the rest is so good and hopefully you'll be able to insert another syllable in the second line. Keep in touch so that I can see. Thanks Debbie

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023

Debbie done! Thanks

reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 09-Jun-2023

That's great! Good luck!

Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

Excellent entry for the Nonet Poetry writing prompt with best of luck in the writing prompt! The poem flowed quite nicely throughout the entire piece of the well written work!

Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you and your family!

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 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023

Thanks Melodie.