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Comment from Pearl Edwards
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My thoughts go out to you all Debi. Life just doesn't seem fair sometimes and this is one of those times. A beautiful poem for your Goddaughter/niece at a time when words are had to say. Hugs to all
Valda

 Comment Written 27-May-2023


reply by the author on 31-May-2023
    Hi Valda, I cannot thank you enough for your kindness and your caring support for our sad loss of Aaron. The hardest is watching Becky and the kids have to go through so much right now. I hope she has half of the support system with others as I have with all of my wonderful friends here. Love you all and thank you so much.
Comment from jmdg1954
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Debi,

I am so sorry to hear of this unexpected loss of life in your family. It's tragic and I'm honestly at a loss for words because I know your heart is so big and I know you're hurting.

Just know that our God has a plan and needed Aaron immediately!

I offer you my arms for strength and my eyes for you to clearly see the good in due time.

I will keep you and your family inmy thoughts and prayers.

John


 Comment Written 27-May-2023


reply by the author on 31-May-2023
    Hi John, I cannot thank you enough for your kindness and your caring support for our sad loss of Aaron. The hardest is watching Becky and the kids have to go through so much right now. I hope she has half of the support system with others as I have with all of my wonderful friends here. Love you all and thank you so much.
Comment from Teri7
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Debi, I am so very sorry to hear of this tragedy my friend! We never know how much time we have left on this earth. My love and prayers are with you and all your family during this time. Just hold on to that precious unchanging hand of our Lord, God Jesus Christ. His Holy Spirit and Angels will comfort you all and be with you. He never fails us nor leaves us. I love you so much, but God loves you so much more!!! Teri
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 Comment Written 27-May-2023


reply by the author on 31-May-2023

    Hi Teri, I cannot thank you enough for your kindness and your caring support for our sad loss of Aaron. The hardest is watching Becky and the kids have to go through so much right now. I hope she has half of the support system with others as I have with all of my wonderful friends here. Love you all and thank you so much.
Comment from GregoryCody
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I'm so sorry. I'm so very sorry.

Father God,

Holy holy holy. Hallowed be Your name.

We are grateful for everything you have given to us.

We come to you as Your children and ask of you in Jesus's name.

Please ease their hearts and comfort them. We do not know Your plans but we trust You. It just hurts so much Lord. You know especially. Please, we ask for a Breakthrough in the relief of their heartache, and more revelation into Your plan.

We ask the Holy Spirit to overflow in them each.

Please take care of your son Aaron and let him know how much he was loved.

Please lift Becky up and hold her under Your wing. Be her Refuge. Just as important, Reveal to her that she is in there. Allow her to rest.

We pray this in the mighty name, the name above all names and the King of Kings, our Savior, Your Son, Jesus Christ.

Amen.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023


reply by the author on 31-May-2023
    Hi Greg,, I cannot thank you enough for your lovely prayer, kindness and your caring support for our sad loss of Aaron. The hardest is watching Becky and the kids have to go through so much right now. I hope she has half of the support system with others as I have with all of my wonderful friends here. Love you all and thank you so much. And thanks so much
    ,for the gift of six stars.
Comment from w.j.debi
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When those hard, unexpected times come, it is hard not to wish to go back another day and possibly change things. But time isn't something we can control.
So sorry for your loss. Thanks for sharing your grief and your faith. God bless and strengthen you.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023


reply by the author on 31-May-2023
    Hi Debi, I cannot thank you enough for your kindness and your caring support for our sad loss of Aaron. The hardest is watching Becky and the kids have to go through so much right now. I hope she has half of the support system with others as I have with all of my wonderful friends here. Love you all and thank you so much.
Comment from LateBloomer
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Debi, this is horrific news. My deepest condolences to you and your Goddaughter's family. Your poem asks a mighty question:

Dear God, can't we please just go back another day

(Unlike childhood games, sadly, there are no do-overs in life. What's done is done, and can never be undone.)

Your poem reads and flows well and the mystery of the unknown has been expressed. There are some things in life that we will never have the answer to. Of special note:

I'm thankful for the friends, who pray for all our sorrow

(Through the support of friends and family, prayers, and the Grace of God, Becky will find her way--albeit it painful and most difficult.)

Lovely photo from a happier time and when time was on their side.

My deepest condolences to all. Well done. A poem from the heart.
Xo. M

 Comment Written 27-May-2023


reply by the author on 31-May-2023
    Hi Margaret,, I cannot thank you enough for your kindness and your caring support for our sad loss of Aaron. The hardest is watching Becky and the kids have to go through so much right now. I hope she has half of the support system with others as I have with all of my wonderful friends here. Love you all and thank you so much
Comment from Mario PIERRE
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Oh my dear God!
I am saying a special prayer for your family and specifically for easing the pain and deep sorrow of Becky!
You are right, we can't understand and can't even ask why?
But we believe, and we know Aaron is in a good place, and I pray that the author and finisher of our faith hols Becky in his tender arms, as she is going through this valley.
I'm so sorry Debi!

 Comment Written 27-May-2023


reply by the author on 27-May-2023
    Mario, your caring words and friendship meant more to me than you could possibly know. I feel like a warm caring teddy bear just hugged me, then sent six stars to shine over Becky as if to let her know that Aaron is ok.
    Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
reply by Mario PIERRE on 27-May-2023
    You're most welcome, Debi. I said this from the heart.
Comment from Raul1
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found. I like it. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 27-May-2023


reply by the author on 31-May-2023
    Hi Raul, I thank you but I do have to wonder if you read the poem.
Comment from jessizero
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This poem was heartbreaking. I will pray for the family and of course for your goddaughter. I loved the repetition in your poem, though it was sad. Best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023


reply by the author on 31-May-2023
    , Hi Jessi, I cannot thank you enough for your kindness and your caring support for our sad loss of Aaron. The hardest is watching Becky and the kids have to go through so much right now. I hope she has half of the support system with others as I have with all of my wonderful friends here. Love you all and thank you so much.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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My prayers are with you and your family and friends as God will intervene and help as you deal with this loss. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us. Please know we are there for you.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023


reply by the author on 31-May-2023
    Barb, I cannot thank you enough for your kindness and your caring support for our sad loss of Aaron. The hardest is watching Becky and the kids have to go through so much right now. I hope she has half of the support system with others as I have with all of my wonderful friends here. Love you all and thank' you so much.