Good Riddance
Bye Bye, So Long, Farewell32 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-I even remember the song!
-You wrote a very good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You do a good job showing how
you are saying good bye to winter
after having looked at it for so long.
-A good entry and creative approach; good luck!!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-I even remember the song!
-You wrote a very good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You do a good job showing how
you are saying good bye to winter
after having looked at it for so long.
-A good entry and creative approach; good luck!!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Hi Pam, Thanks so much for your kind comments for my poem!
I appreciate it very much!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Spitfire
That's my feeling about winter and why I moved from the North to Florida over forty years ago! The comparison of patches of snow to cotton balls is a valid one.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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That's my feeling about winter and why I moved from the North to Florida over forty years ago! The comparison of patches of snow to cotton balls is a valid one.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Hey Shari, Thanks so much for your kind comments for my poem!
I appreciate it very much!
Comment from Janet Foor
I think we are all ready to bid winter adieu. Spring has arrived and winter is history, or so we hope. Excellent artwork to convey your message of hope for nice weather and hope we don't see anymore snow.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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I think we are all ready to bid winter adieu. Spring has arrived and winter is history, or so we hope. Excellent artwork to convey your message of hope for nice weather and hope we don't see anymore snow.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Hi Janet! Thanks so much for your kind comments for my poem!
I appreciate it very much!
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Hi Raul, Thanks so much for your kind comments for my poem!
I appreciate it very much!
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You're welcome!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a perfect presentation, Mystery Author.
The picture was beautiful and the end rhymes
were an added bonus. I understood how one
would feel about cotton after a looonnngg winter.
The video was a great addition. The font and color
scheme worked well, too. Syllable count was correct per
line.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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What a perfect presentation, Mystery Author.
The picture was beautiful and the end rhymes
were an added bonus. I understood how one
would feel about cotton after a looonnngg winter.
The video was a great addition. The font and color
scheme worked well, too. Syllable count was correct per
line.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Thanks Jan. I sure appreciate your very kind review and comments,
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Ode To Winter writing prompt contest. I like the presentation too. The ode flows well. and I don't see any mistakes.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Excellent entry for the Ode To Winter writing prompt contest. I like the presentation too. The ode flows well. and I don't see any mistakes.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Thanks so much for your kind comments for my poem!
I appreciate it very much!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi,
This tells us how snow is forgotten when cottonwood flies even though in looks like snow. We call it our Spring snow along with the fallen white leaves or our flowering crabapple trees.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Hi,
This tells us how snow is forgotten when cottonwood flies even though in looks like snow. We call it our Spring snow along with the fallen white leaves or our flowering crabapple trees.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Hi Joan ! Thanks so much for your kind comments for my poem!
I appreciate it very much!
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Don't mention it.
Joan
Comment from royowen
I guess winter is not a great time for most people, and the other three are OK really. So for three months of the year it's cold, but the others are OK, Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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I guess winter is not a great time for most people, and the other three are OK really. So for three months of the year it's cold, but the others are OK, Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Hi Roy, I guess I do appreciate all of what God gives us.. I just might appreciate some more than others. Like my mom always said if you can imagine it worse, than it can't be as bad as all that! LOL thanks my friend
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Yep, in all things give thanks
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Author,
I'm guessing your winters and mine here in Australia are a tad different? We have just started to cool down here and have one month to go before winter strikes.
A very clever little 5-7-5 mono rhyming construction and definitely put a smile on my dial reading it.
The very best wishes in this contest... it's a great presentation!
With our thoughts we create...
a warm heart.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Hi Author,
I'm guessing your winters and mine here in Australia are a tad different? We have just started to cool down here and have one month to go before winter strikes.
A very clever little 5-7-5 mono rhyming construction and definitely put a smile on my dial reading it.
The very best wishes in this contest... it's a great presentation!
With our thoughts we create...
a warm heart.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Thanks so much for your kind comments for my poem James!!
I appreciate it very much!
Comment from w.j.debi
Spring and winter are having a fun time having us guess which one we will wake to at the moment. I love the picture. The snow does look like cotton on that flower. Thank you for a great nature poem.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Spring and winter are having a fun time having us guess which one we will wake to at the moment. I love the picture. The snow does look like cotton on that flower. Thank you for a great nature poem.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Ave Debi , Thanks so much for your kind comments for my poem!
I appreciate it very much!