Birthdays
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Comment from kiwisteveh
Hi, Debi. You obviously relish FanStory for sociability reasons! here you celebrate a milestone for Valda/Pearl and the kind thoughts in your piece shine through as coming from a true friend.
You may not know but New Zealand and Australia share a National Public Holiday on April 25th (for ANZAC Day - a commemoration of a military action in WWI which serves as a day to remember our armed forces, especially those who gave their lives.)
I only mention that since it seems Pearl will have enjoyed a holiday on the eve of her birthday for her whole life! That must be nice.
I enjoyed as always your pleasant verse.
Steve
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Hi, Debi. You obviously relish FanStory for sociability reasons! here you celebrate a milestone for Valda/Pearl and the kind thoughts in your piece shine through as coming from a true friend.
You may not know but New Zealand and Australia share a National Public Holiday on April 25th (for ANZAC Day - a commemoration of a military action in WWI which serves as a day to remember our armed forces, especially those who gave their lives.)
I only mention that since it seems Pearl will have enjoyed a holiday on the eve of her birthday for her whole life! That must be nice.
I enjoyed as always your pleasant verse.
Steve
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Thanks so much for that bit of really interesting info regarding the NZ and Australia. It is such an important time for us, because our fathers fought that war to keep us free and it is nice to see other allies like you guys pull together for a national day. Much like Pearl Harbor. I do enjoy writing poems for people because I love to see people smile, even if it is only in my mind.
I see your birthday has dome and gone on 2-2, so I will get you next year. Thanks for the wonderful reviews and always being so kind, Steve. You are the greatest!
Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful 'My Merry-go-Rhyme poems, Debi. Even a day late- Happy Birthday to Pearl Edwards (Valda), which is better that forget her. I loved your picture because it proved that she is a pearl. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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This was a wonderful 'My Merry-go-Rhyme poems, Debi. Even a day late- Happy Birthday to Pearl Edwards (Valda), which is better that forget her. I loved your picture because it proved that she is a pearl. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thanks so much Alli, for your lovely review and words for this poem for Valda. It is a little different, but she is she is such a unique woman. Thanks again my dear friend.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
what a wonderful way to touch someone's thoughts, then to send them a birthday greeting. Birthdays and celebrations are more appreciative when you get elderly; especially when it is a surprise.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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what a wonderful way to touch someone's thoughts, then to send them a birthday greeting. Birthdays and celebrations are more appreciative when you get elderly; especially when it is a surprise.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thanks so much for your lovely review and words for this poem for Valda. It is a little different, but she is she is such a unique woman. Thanks again my dear friend.
And Rosemary, I looked and I don't think I have your birthday. I truly want to celebrate the wonderful friends who have been so good to me.
Comment from Ulla
Aw, how lovely this is, Debbie. You do know how to make a birthday greeting become something very personal. I'm sure Valda will be over the moon. What a sweet friend you are. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Aw, how lovely this is, Debbie. You do know how to make a birthday greeting become something very personal. I'm sure Valda will be over the moon. What a sweet friend you are. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thanks so much for your lovely review and words for this poem for Valda. It is a little different, but she is she is such a unique woman. Thanks again my dear friend.
Ulla, would you mind giving me your birthday? I don't want to push myself on people, but I love celebrating the people that have been so good to me. And you are certainly one of them.
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Not at all. It's on the 23 of May.
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Thanks so much Ulla! 😘
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Big smile xx
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Thank you so much Debi for this beautiful poem I feel so honoured to think you did this for me. I usually slip under the radar. Thanks heaps. Love it.
Valdaš?„°š?„°
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much Debi for this beautiful poem I feel so honoured to think you did this for me. I usually slip under the radar. Thanks heaps. Love it.
Valdaš?„°š?„°
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Oh thank you ! If there is anything that you want changed, I would be happy to . I just want you to be happy! I made your format A little different because you are so special. But not everyone likes different styles.
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I love it. Will I be able to print it, would you mind Debi.
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I would be delighted if you would print it! You are such a delight Valda! 💕.
Comment from papa55mike
Wow, we share the same birthday. Yes, Pearl is a treasure and I love her writing. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Wow, we share the same birthday. Yes, Pearl is a treasure and I love her writing. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Hi there Mike, I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Valda. They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Cherish Adams
You have written a beautiful rhyme. It being in honor of friend here on this site is a gift. Not just to the honoree but for the rest of us as well. Thank you for sharing.
Did you have a blast with the siblings? I hope so.
Cherish
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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You have written a beautiful rhyme. It being in honor of friend here on this site is a gift. Not just to the honoree but for the rest of us as well. Thank you for sharing.
Did you have a blast with the siblings? I hope so.
Cherish
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Hi there pretty lady, I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Valda. They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from royowen
I was wondering to whom this was addressed, and before the name was uttered, I knew it was Valda, who hails from Townsville who could fits Texas into Queensland itwo and a Half times, you are very kind Debi, she lives in the tropics, we call them banana benders. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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I was wondering to whom this was addressed, and before the name was uttered, I knew it was Valda, who hails from Townsville who could fits Texas into Queensland itwo and a Half times, you are very kind Debi, she lives in the tropics, we call them banana benders. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Hi Roy, I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Valda. They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I knew the instant I realized this was a birthday greeting
who it was written for, Debi. The image was perfect--love
the beautiful pearl. I know this FS member as Pearl. Your
awesome card was a treat to read. I love your merry-go-
round style. It's light-hearted but still filled with great
details about the birthday person. I know Pearl will enjoy
this. Your words gave readers great insight into her life.
I loved the line about diamond in the skies. I remember
the sadness when her hubby died. This will surely cheer her
on her special day. Memories made will always be a treasure
today and forever.
Thanks for sharing and caring, Jan
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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I knew the instant I realized this was a birthday greeting
who it was written for, Debi. The image was perfect--love
the beautiful pearl. I know this FS member as Pearl. Your
awesome card was a treat to read. I love your merry-go-
round style. It's light-hearted but still filled with great
details about the birthday person. I know Pearl will enjoy
this. Your words gave readers great insight into her life.
I loved the line about diamond in the skies. I remember
the sadness when her hubby died. This will surely cheer her
on her special day. Memories made will always be a treasure
today and forever.
Thanks for sharing and caring, Jan
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Valda. They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Carol Clark2
A nice birthday greeting for Valda, with a beautiful pearl picture. It's so good of you to remember her special day. The Merry-Go-Rhyme format is cute and the rhymes are good. Thanks for sharing, and belated wishes for Valda. Blessings.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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A nice birthday greeting for Valda, with a beautiful pearl picture. It's so good of you to remember her special day. The Merry-Go-Rhyme format is cute and the rhymes are good. Thanks for sharing, and belated wishes for Valda. Blessings.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Valda. They are so appreciated, my dear friend!