Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

Another very good chapter. The stalker wasn't hurt by the storm, apparently. Seth and Emma continue to dance around each other, neither wanting to admit they are already more than friends.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Now this really showed Seth and his confused feelings towards Emma. He does like her. He's starting to admit that to himself. Always a first step. I love how he jokes about Molly the furball. I'm very curious about the burgundy Crown Victoria. Can't wait for a confrontation between Seth and that person. Great chapter. Gretchen

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023

They will meet and it will not be good. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Shirley McLain

Exceptional

Another great half a chapter that I enjoyed reading. I like Emma's independence. She's a strong feisty gal. You did a wonderful job. Have a great evening. Shirley

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

It seems Seth is getting on well with Emma, plus Molly and Ace are a hit, with Ace shepherding Molly, and Seth no sure she's a dog, (just like our Moodle Lucky) much to clean up after the storm, but the stalker is still around the place. Well done Barbara, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023

Thank you for the kind support.

reply by royowen on 17-Apr-2023

Welcome

Comment from Sankey

Exceptional

Great reading, again. For some reason, FS says I needed more verbage! A few spags for you today. "Where (are)you going?"
Why [she] didn't (she)use the

When I [have] (get) out the ladder,

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023

I have made the corrections. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

I'm waiting for Seth to kiss her, albeit by mistake. But it looks like he's a gentlemen and doesn't want to ruin a good thing ready to happen.

He needs to solve the Crown Vic issue...

One small typo-
When I have out the ladder, I'll take a closer look. (the ladder out)

Excellent flowing chapter.

John

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023

Thank you for the kind review. The descriptive word needs to come closest to the verb as possible, so it's have out, but I just changed it to get out.

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

Emma and Seth seem to be getting comfortable in each other's company, doing tasks together and teasing each other. Of course, you keep the tension going with the mysterious stalker in the car. Now, who could it be?

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Hi, Barbara, although I think Emma and Seth will become an a couple soon, I still believe that Emma is quite oblivious to the fact. Well, we'll soon know won't we? Ullaxx

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

Emma has lived a very protected life. It will be very difficult for her. Her daddy is still the love of her life.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

It seems that Emma is oblivious to Seth's feelings for her. I hope we find out soon who is watching her in the burgundy Crown Victoria and why. I can't even make a guess.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

It will still be a very more chapters before we discover who this person it. He's really bad. yes, Emma doesn't know much about life. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, Barbara,

Another excellent chapter. I think Seth is very methodical. I like how determined to catch the creepy stalker.

Your story is very engaging and you do a great job developing the characters.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

Thank you for the kind support.