Guided by Faith
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Comment from jmdg1954
Barbara. I thought the part where they both suspected someone entered Emma's apartment was a little weak. Breaking and entering is a serious offense. Especially in the police chiefs backyard. Maybe a paragraph with some details or nervousness on Emma's part?
Just a suggestion I thought to add validity to the situation.
John
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Barbara. I thought the part where they both suspected someone entered Emma's apartment was a little weak. Breaking and entering is a serious offense. Especially in the police chiefs backyard. Maybe a paragraph with some details or nervousness on Emma's part?
Just a suggestion I thought to add validity to the situation.
John
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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They don't know anything. It's just a gut feeling they both had. Not a single bit of evidence. thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
Blackmail! I didn't see that coming. Promises to open into some very interesting twists and turns and imaginative writing. If someone has been inside they can get copies made of her keys. Not good. Just as well the locks will be changed. Well done, a very enjoyable read.
Wendy
Typo: "goggles" not "googles"
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Blackmail! I didn't see that coming. Promises to open into some very interesting twists and turns and imaginative writing. If someone has been inside they can get copies made of her keys. Not good. Just as well the locks will be changed. Well done, a very enjoyable read.
Wendy
Typo: "goggles" not "googles"
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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LOL Thank you for the catch. I appreciate the help and the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
Reading this and where money is a factor in silence made me realize how people can scrape the bottom of life for a few bucks. Good post. Now we have some gossip to deal with.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Reading this and where money is a factor in silence made me realize how people can scrape the bottom of life for a few bucks. Good post. Now we have some gossip to deal with.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
This is fun to read. The mystery deepens. I don't get why parents don't tell children they're adopted when they're mature enough to handle it. They almost always find out and it often doesn't end so well. I think they should know while they're still young. If they know they were wanted and loved they should have less problem.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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This is fun to read. The mystery deepens. I don't get why parents don't tell children they're adopted when they're mature enough to handle it. They almost always find out and it often doesn't end so well. I think they should know while they're still young. If they know they were wanted and loved they should have less problem.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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It will cause a problem when Emma finds out. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Another good read. Things are getting a little more serious, now. I did wonder if the invader might have copied her old keys. Not sure if there is gonna be romance with the police chief. I guess we will find out, soon. Well done. No spags.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Another good read. Things are getting a little more serious, now. I did wonder if the invader might have copied her old keys. Not sure if there is gonna be romance with the police chief. I guess we will find out, soon. Well done. No spags.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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It's a romance novel. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
I always look forward to the weekend when you and another author I'm following post. This is another excellent chapter. There is increased tension with the possible stalker. There is no room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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I always look forward to the weekend when you and another author I'm following post. This is another excellent chapter. There is increased tension with the possible stalker. There is no room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I always look forward to your reviews.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This was an interesting chapter, except I would have liked to read of some concrete evidence proving that someone had been inside Emma's house during their absence - so much kerfuffle on a hunch didn't sit too well with me. kay
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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This was an interesting chapter, except I would have liked to read of some concrete evidence proving that someone had been inside Emma's house during their absence - so much kerfuffle on a hunch didn't sit too well with me. kay
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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There will be more evidence later, but right now it's just a guess. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Being adopted myself, I don't like the Idea of holding back such information. I knew about it from day one and it became a natural thing throughout my upbringing.
So much harm is done to the poor child. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Being adopted myself, I don't like the Idea of holding back such information. I knew about it from day one and it became a natural thing throughout my upbringing.
So much harm is done to the poor child. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Emma will be extremely upset when she finds out. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Emma doesn't know she's adopted? I say it's time to tell her. Another case of overly protective (adoptive) parents. It's good to have another possible suspect who might be stalking Emma. It adds to the suspense. I think you might want just a little bit of something, other than feelings, that someone has been in Emma's house. It could be just a small item out place, for instance. I think there needs to be more to justify Seth not wanting her to spend the night in the house. Just my thought. Excellent characterization. You're definitely building suspense. judi
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Emma doesn't know she's adopted? I say it's time to tell her. Another case of overly protective (adoptive) parents. It's good to have another possible suspect who might be stalking Emma. It adds to the suspense. I think you might want just a little bit of something, other than feelings, that someone has been in Emma's house. It could be just a small item out place, for instance. I think there needs to be more to justify Seth not wanting her to spend the night in the house. Just my thought. Excellent characterization. You're definitely building suspense. judi
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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All of this will come to a head before long. Emma will discover she's adopted and not in the best way. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
It sounds like there's a bad guy on the loose. Another clue: the adopted father told the officer about a fellow who sent Emma's father mail regarding a ransom note.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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It sounds like there's a bad guy on the loose. Another clue: the adopted father told the officer about a fellow who sent Emma's father mail regarding a ransom note.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. There is a bad guy around.
