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Comment from Mintybee
This fits the challenging syllable requirement. The topic is a deep and always-relevant one. The mix of internal and external rhyme was creative. The idea that "pain and cries be all that dies," is an optimistic one, and something encouraging to think on.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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This fits the challenging syllable requirement. The topic is a deep and always-relevant one. The mix of internal and external rhyme was creative. The idea that "pain and cries be all that dies," is an optimistic one, and something encouraging to think on.
Mintybee
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for this awesome review. I truly appreciate the feedback!
Comment from Julie Lau
Well done with this poem, produced within that challenging format. It bears a very worthwhile message, encouraging the reader to bear through the tough times and look forward to better times ahead.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Well done with this poem, produced within that challenging format. It bears a very worthwhile message, encouraging the reader to bear through the tough times and look forward to better times ahead.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much! I appreciate the feedback!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the flow and rhymes in this short poem and the warm faithful sentiment too, I wish you luck with the contest, I enjoyed your sweet believable words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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I love the flow and rhymes in this short poem and the warm faithful sentiment too, I wish you luck with the contest, I enjoyed your sweet believable words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Dolly <3
Comment from jmdg1954
A beautiful poem for the 1-1-2-12 challenge.
It's tough (at least for me) to put something so profound into so few words and syllables. It's like a poets version of flash fiction.
Best of luck in the contest.
John
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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A beautiful poem for the 1-1-2-12 challenge.
It's tough (at least for me) to put something so profound into so few words and syllables. It's like a poets version of flash fiction.
Best of luck in the contest.
John
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you, John! I truly appreciate that.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
This is so beautiful, Mystery Poet. The art is lovely and so appropriate, your poem with such restrictions on syllables are perfectly placed, with the perfect message.
In my eyes it's number one. Good luck in the contest, but I will be there to cast your first vote.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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This is so beautiful, Mystery Poet. The art is lovely and so appropriate, your poem with such restrictions on syllables are perfectly placed, with the perfect message.
In my eyes it's number one. Good luck in the contest, but I will be there to cast your first vote.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much, my friend.
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Very good opening words.
-A very good closing line about experiencing pain,
and putting your trust in God that it will be better.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Very good opening words.
-A very good closing line about experiencing pain,
and putting your trust in God that it will be better.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Pam! I appreciate your feedback!
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You are welcome.
Comment from royowen
An excellent entry in this 1/1/2/12 poetry contest. How could I not like this? Indeed the only way I know of fulfilling, or rather curing one of all one's maladies, is give what ails you, and everything else to God, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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An excellent entry in this 1/1/2/12 poetry contest. How could I not like this? Indeed the only way I know of fulfilling, or rather curing one of all one's maladies, is give what ails you, and everything else to God, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Roy!
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Most welcome
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a good message for the reader to be invited to reflect upon the first three words. They all take courage. Just to stay at a daunting task takes courage. I don't know if you are familiar with my role model, Sue Aikens who knows how to face any challenge. She stays, tries or works at it & knows no one is going tpo do it for her, so she must.
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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This is a good message for the reader to be invited to reflect upon the first three words. They all take courage. Just to stay at a daunting task takes courage. I don't know if you are familiar with my role model, Sue Aikens who knows how to face any challenge. She stays, tries or works at it & knows no one is going tpo do it for her, so she must.
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your awesome review. Truly appreciated!!
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Comment from RodG
You have urged us to not give up, but to trust in Him. Your message is very well conveyed in this novel format. I especially like your use of rhyme. Rod
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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You have urged us to not give up, but to trust in Him. Your message is very well conveyed in this novel format. I especially like your use of rhyme. Rod
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much, Rod. That means a lot. <3